[DELETED] [NDS] Pokémon Diamond Version & Pokémon Pearl Version - "Oreburgh City (Day)" by TheMarioPianist

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Diamond Version & Pokémon Pearl Version
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Oreburgh City (Day)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: TheMarioPianist

[TheMarioPianist]

(Yes, I actually submitted something!)

Ok, my main concern here is around measure 25. I've been debating whether I should attempt to put the second voice in or not (and possibly how to incorporate it). Also, I feel like there should be more dynamic markings in spots, but for some reason I was not picking up enough variation in volume. Feel free to critique on those two things along with anything else you find! Thanks!

[DonValentino]

Hmm... m. 17+ does sound a little empty. Maybe try to add some dazzle to that part?

[TheMarioPianist]

Hmm... m. 17+ does sound a little empty. Maybe try to add some dazzle to that part?

Just posting so you know I haven't forgotten about this. School severely limits the amount of time I have to arrange, and right now I'm devoting most of my time to frantically finishing my entry for the arrangement contest. I'll hopefully get to this soonish!

(Read as: Don't delete this submission please! I just have to put it off until the arrangement contest submission due date, which is the 8th. I will come back and fix this up after that ASAP!)

[TheMarioPianist]

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[TheMarioPianist]

Hmm... m. 17+ does sound a little empty. Maybe try to add some dazzle to that part?

Finally, I was able to make some progress on this. I added the second layer in measures 25-30, which definitely adds some "dazzle." 17-22 will be my next task, which will be difficult due to a barely audible second layer. The goal is that you can examine the last 6 measures while I finish up this section, which will take me more time. See, told you I wouldn't forget! (I will update this post once I finish 17-22.

[TheMarioPianist]

Due to difficulty in picking out the second layer in 17-22, I am going to pull back this submission to make room for another. I will wait to resubmit this until I get that second layer.