[PC] Lucid9: Inciting Incident - "Melancholy" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Lucid9: Inciting Incident
Console: PC
Title: Melancholy
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

52:54

Loops in-game, doesn't loop in the official OST, so I put in both the repeat and the ending.

[Tobbeh99]

Nice done!

-Measure 26: It sounds to me like the pedal is lifted mid-measure as an effect. I'd show this in the arrangement, it sounds really cool as well.

-Last 4 measures: I think it would be nice having a diminuendo in the last 4 measures, sounds like that in the original.

[mastersuperfan]

Nice done!

-Measure 26: It sounds to me like the pedal is lifted mid-measure as an effect. I'd show this in the arrangement, it sounds really cool as well.

-Last 4 measures: I think it would be nice having a diminuendo in the last 4 measures, sounds like that in the original.

Done.

[Sebastian]

Wow. This is a beautiful sheet. I love everything about it. The formatting is superb and your arrangement is excellent.

Just a couple things:
- According to the original, the left hand of M. 41 is the same as the two previous measures.
- The little 8va in M. 29 is a tad confusing to me. I had to give a double take before it clicked for me .
I would say this is optional, but would like to recommend these two ways:

This way would make it perfectly clear to the performer what to do right when he/she gets to the measure (in my opinion).

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This way is a little more "cluttery", but I try to do clefs over 8va markings in the left hand whenever I get the opportunity.

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Again, totally optional. I'm just throwing those examples out there for you.

- In M. 27 (left hand) for example where you have eighth tied to eighth - dotted quarter. I know that it would be easier for some people to count (well, for me anyway) if you made it more like this (using M. 27 as an example).

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Again, totally optional. Just thought I'd mention that for you to consider.

This is an awesome arrangement and a very beautiful piece. Terrific job! : )

[mastersuperfan]

- According to the original, the left hand of M. 41 is the same as the two previous measures.

Done.

This way is a little more "cluttery", but I try to do clefs over 8va markings in the left hand whenever I get the opportunity.

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Done.

This is an awesome arrangement and a very beautiful piece. Terrific job! : )

Thanks!

And for all of you who have absolutely no clue what this game is (read: those of you whom I haven't messaged in the past few days), you should definitely check it out. It's a visual novel on Steam, and it's free, so little to lose there.

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