[PC] Undertale - "Fallen Down (Reprise)" by Echo

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Fallen Down (Reprise)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Echo

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[Echo]

Go easy on me, it's been a while since I've arranged.

I'm guessing my repeats aren't optimal, but I wasn't sure how to set them up without looking too messy.

[Latios212]

slight touch
Not a thorough check, bit this includes:
- text alignment
- fits on 4 pages
- clef change from m. 54 onward, LH

You may want to consider changing LH to bass clef in other places too, but that's a matter of preference.

[Echo]

Thanks bro, updated the first post!

And yeah, I was unsure about the clef I should've used for the left hand a bit. In the end I figured that m. 38 onward would be easier to read in Treble Clef, and that it'd be easy to figure out for m. 54 onward that the lower bass note is just an octave. The way you changed it too still looks neat, but now I'm not sure if I should change the section from m. 38 now too, since it might be confusing to change clefs even though the parts are similar.

Oh, and if by "text alignment" you meant the dynamics in measures 28-29, I only meant for the changes to affect the right hand, so I intentionally kept them higher.

[Olimar12345]

ECHO you need to submit more often!!

[Echo]

Made an MP3 in case anyone wanted to listen to it on mobile or something.

ECHO you need to submit more often!!

Count on it.

[FireArrow]

Count on it.

yasss

[Bespinben]

It's pretty good! My only qualm is m. 37. It's unclear where the "RH" marking begins to apply, and the left-hand chord on beat 1 is not playable, not because it's a 10th, but because you have it arranged as bass, 8th, 10th, which would require the hand to span an octave between the 5 and 2 fingers while similtaneously extending the thumb upward a 3rd. In order for the hand to span an octave between the 5 and 2 fingers, the thumb MUST stretch back, making a 10th unplayable in this position.

[Echo]

How about now? I put the "R.H." right above the first left hand chord and put brackets around the notes that I meant for the right hand to play (so it's not that I wanted the left hand to do a tenth, but for the right hand to play a C#/E chord, while the left hand plays a mere octave).

A cleaner alternative I had in mind for writing that C#-D-E phrase was to put those notes in the second layer for the right hand. However, I want the decrescendo for the bass to be taken into account for that C#-D-E part too. I can't just put the decrescendo for both hands since the melody itself doesn't get softer for that part, so that's why I wrote it that way.

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