[GCN] Luigi's Mansion - "Main Theme" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

Started by Zeta, November 13, 2015, 12:46:15 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Main Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:

Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Sebastian




SlowPokemon

You have no articulations, and some of your phrasing doesn't match the original. Try to make sure that if a note is staccato in the original, for instance, you notate that, and don't have a slur over notes that should have a break in them somewhere.
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 21, 2016, 02:56:11 PM
Fuck logic, that shit is boring, lame and does not always support my opinions.

Sebastian




Sebastian

I actually have all the staccatos I want. I noticed there could be a few more in the left hand. How's it look now? (Links in OP updated)



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