[NES] Anticipation - "Title Screen" by joeberryosponge

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Anticipation
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: joeberryosponge

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[Yug_Guy]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXqC3GpWxSs

For future reference, you should follow up with a post containing the video of your song.

Otherwise, I think this arrangement's looking pretty good so far. We'll have to wait and see what the more senior staff have to say about it.

[braix]

Sounds pretty good to me

[Brawler4Ever]

Your formatting needs a bit of work: http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0

Watch for the text sizes and whether it's bold/italicized in the header.

[Bespinben]

In the last system (m.32-33), the notes are far too spread out. This is because you have only 2 measures in that system, a problem that can fixed if you simply assign each system to have 4 measure each. Notice how your current sheet has m. 18-22 (5 measures) in a single system, as well as m. 23-27? This is the source of the problem.

EDIT: This is a really good arrangement (nice job esp. w/ the articulation), so I decided to fix this minor issue in lieu of your approval since it seems you disappeared.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

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