[GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Cipher Syndicate" by Pianist Da Sootopolis

Started by Zeta, August 05, 2015, 12:08:39 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Colosseum
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Cipher Syndicate
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Pianist Da Sootopolis

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Bespinben

While you always excel in the your expression markings and musical performance directions, the arrangement itself needs work.

Here's how m. 1-4 should play out:



1.) The organ has harmony in 5ths, which was not present.
2.) The rhythm of the timpani is syncopated -- the second strike is on beat 2.5, not beat 3.
3.) The upright string bass was missing in m. 1, and in m. 2 it was incorrectly transcribed.


Here's how m. 5-6 should play out:



It's not unison. There are individual harmonies on nearly all the chord strikes.


Here's the file I created to make these screenshots. I expect great things of m. 7+, which are similarly afflicted:
[MUSX]

Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Pianist Da Sootopolis

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Pianist Da Sootopolis

Quick question- with the guitar riff at m. 7, should the bottom voice still be an eighth note and the top voice be a quarter, or just make the entire thing an eighth? Or just keep it as is?
 
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DonValentino

So, from Bespin's work I finished the rest but not gonna accept because I can't do the musx (please someone!).

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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