[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Romance in the Air (Two Pianos)" by Bespinben

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Romance in the Air
Instrumentation Two Pianos
Arranger: Bespinben

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[Xaoz]

Adding for comparison:

I hate to always be that guy:

Fix url!

Except for that: I think it is pretty good.

[Bespinben]

Yeah, the age of this sheet really shows, huh? Muddled with all my ottava clef nonsense too.
Fixed it!

[Xaoz]

Yeah, the age of this sheet really shows, huh? Muddled with all my ottava clef nonsense too.
Fixed it!

At the heart of the matter, I just don't want you settling for mediocre work, Bespinben. Don't ask "is it good enough for you now?", but ask yourself "what more can I improve upon?".

[Bespinben]

Accept, DekuTrombonist?

[The Deku Trombonist]

Layout Nazi stuff: move the staves lower on page 1 to give the composer/arranger info some space.

Perhaps a time signature of 6/8 (12/16) would be better? It would come in especially handy in bar 22 and possibly in other spots. And I think the beaming should be changed accordingly there too. It's not immediately obvious what the feel is supposed to be there (good thing I've played wind waker).

That's probably all I can say from the bus 

[Bespinben]

12/16 works wonders. Thank you.

I drastically re-did the entire layout too. Much less cramped now.

Revised some articulation and the ending, for good measure.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot