[GCN] Kirby Air Ride - "Celestial Valley" by Bespinben

[Brassman388]

I just thought the b9 in bar 18 was a bit much. The b7 works rather nicely.

It can be much simpler than that, too.

Bespinben, you should try resolving it as the measure progresses. Set it up as whatever chord you think it is, then resolve it to its primary triad. Make the Bmadd9 to a simple Bm on the '&' of the second beat. You get best of both worlds. Something complex that resolves into something simple.

(Also, I don't have my keyboard setup, so I can't necessarily help with exact tones, yet)

[Bespinben]

Despite my hesitations, I have modified measures 18 and 25. They shall be missed dearly.
(25 actually sounds fine now imo. It's really 18 I'll miss )

[Brassman388]

Is it in the first post? I know how dumb that sounds, but.... I'm still pretty new to all this efficiency.

[The Deku Trombonist]

Yeah and the edit time at the bottom of the post shows you when and who it was last edited by.

[Brassman388]

What do you think, Deku? Think it's ready to be submitted?

Sounds good. Looks good. Kinda reminds me of my earlier work.

[Bespinben]

If this is your earlier work, I wanna see your newest works!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Deku Trombonist.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot