triforced1's Arrangements

[triforced1]

Added Gerudo Valley and FFII Battle replacements.

[Cobraroll]

Just a question on Gerudo Valley:

Several times throughout the sheet, I encounter measures where the right hand notes tell me to hold a key throughout the measure. The left hand notes tell me to tap that same key repeatedly. What do I do then?

Also, I'm a little unsure on the punctuation there. It doesn't always sound quite right, as if the notes are just cut off too early.

[triforced1]

I was kinda sceptical about that part... I don't know if I should move the right hand up an octave or move the left hand down.

EDIT: Fixed. Lowered the left hand down an octave.

[Olimar12345]

Alot of this applies to yours.

-The title of this piece is "Gerudo Valley", not "Gerudo Fortress"(as seen in the official soundtrack)
-The 1st measure does not sound right-Too many wrong notes
-I think someone already mentioned that your missing the url, tempo marking, a ["], and "composition" is misspelled.
-Measures 8-11 dont need 8va
-The rhythm at 8 (and throught the piece) is written incorrectly:

-the 32nd note "trill" thing that starts at 12 is unnecessary-Remove it.
-The rhythm that starts at measure 16 is written incorrectly, look:

See how your able to see all four beats of the measure this way? much easier to read. Anywhere you have this rhythm you must apply this.
-At times You have multiple 8va's that collide-Fix it.
-Measures 16-23 don't even need an 8va.
-Measures 12, 22, and 23 are wrong-


Compare.
-The whole piece has two double bars in it, and both are in useless places
-Measures 24-29, and 32-43 have incorrect rhythm notation, see my 7th comment.
-I'm not totally sure about your choice of octaves throught the piece. I'd give that a good look through if I were you.
-I'd try to incorporate the bass line into the left hand, say have it play on beats 1 and 3, or 2 and 4. (if possible all 4 beats). Its quite a driving force to have a syncopated rhthm fight a simple bass line like this.

Also, those lowered bass notes are impossible to play.

[triforced1]

Alright, fixed. Tell me if I got everything please

[Olimar12345]

Any measure with the rhythm at 32 is written wrong. Use ties until you can see the start of each beat. Also you have note collision in alot of places.

[triforced1]

I thought I had changed the note collision... can you be more specific?

Also, does this look about right for the rhythm at 32?

[Dudeman]

It looks right to me...

[Olimar12345]

That is the correct rhythm! See how much easier that is to read? You can break down each beat and see where the attacks are.

As for the collision-the #F on beat 3 of measures 28 and 29/measures 4-7. Compare yours to this version. (the one that I cleaned up for GO.)I like the left hand better this way. Thats just me tho.

[EFitTrainr]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35741129/Compression%20of%20Time.mid
midi
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35741129/Compression%20of%20Time.mus
mus
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/35741129/Compression%20of%20Time.pdf
pdf

Final Fantasy (some number) Compression of Time
Courtesy of Triforced1.

[Olimar12345]

Where is he?

[EFitTrainr]

Everywhere. Except here. I'm simply doing as he said.

[Olimar12345]

Well that sure is lame of him...