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[Shadoninja]

Star theme

There needs to be a eighth note pickup.

you can remove bars 10 to the end because it's the same 8 bars repeated. if you do this, remember the rules for pickups so that the pickup measure and the end measure equal 4 beats.

the tempo is a bit more than 205.


Ending

The key signature is actually A Major (3#'s, F#,C#,G#). change the key signature and make enharmonic adjustments.
I would fit the measure 4 per system.


Hyrule castle

The key's wrong. the notes are wrong. I'd need to double check but I think it's in G minor (2 b's Bb, Eb).

bar 2 - notes in the right hand are wrong. the 16th notes in the bass emulating the timpani roll doesn't translate well on piano. maybe try a tremolo between the two notes instead of repeated striking of the octave. if that doesn't work make it a whole note octave.

there are a lot of leftover notes from the midi. E.G bar 12 the a of 3.

chromatics going down that have sharps. If a part is going down like in bar 13, you should make all necessary accidentals flat.

wrong rhythms at bar 27 and 29

[The Deku Trombonist]

I've already done a version of Hyrule Castle btw. Check it out, it's sitting near the bottom of the first post of my submission topic.