Submitting arangements - (Added Title Theme - Metroid Prime Trilogy)

[Meta-Ridley]

This is my work for the Metroid Prime series:
Metroid Prime Trilogy - Title theme midi:http://www.mediafire.com/?wnzjij2m2y
                                                 mus:http://www.mediafire.com/?tdjmdwwazn0

Gandrayda Battle Theme               midi:http://www.mediafire.com/?nlomjw4onkh
                                                 mus:http://www.mediafire.com/?ydy5o11nz1d

I hope you enjoy it. please give feedback(it's helpful)!!!!

(please remember that i will keep adding more music for metroid prime. if anyone has any requests, please say so in a reply to this)

[Cobraroll]

There are three sets of identical links there, so all should work. The .mus one does, at least.

However, I haven't heard the arrangement yet, so can't comment on it (am sitting in History class typing this). It looks good, but you could do with some 8va. Also, in measure 15, the highest note in the bass is probably easier to play with the right hand.

For more specific guidelines for formatting, see
http://www.ninsheetm.us/smf/index.php?topic=481.0

You've almost got it, but it needs a little more love to be perfect.

[KefkaticFanatic]

And none of the links will work, because you are using the direct download link which you aren't able to do.  Use the sharing link that mediafire provides.

[Cobraroll]

^I could open it without problems...

Other than that, the arrangement sounds good. However, I echo the formatting issues I mentioned in my first post.

[KefkaticFanatic]

Only two of the midi ones work for me.  He would be better off just getting the shared link anyway.

[Meta-Ridley]

Ok, I've changed the link to the mediafire sharing link. You should now easily access it.

[Olimar12345]

i cant open anything...and i already made a gandrayda's battle theme, so i'll wait untill mediafire decides to let me download to compare the two.

[Olimar12345]

finally saw ur gandrayda theme  and....well i got some feedback 4 ya : D

where to start...

-at 71 the two parts should be on separate lines
-the ascending line that starts at 33 is absolutly unrecognizable.
-measures 11-16 have an impossibe-to-play bass line
-wrong rhythm in measures 49 and 50 and again in 57 and 58
-there's an unneeded "first ending bar" on the last measure(??)
-the residual bell part has multiple errors, the main one being its inconsistency
-lots of high register stuff, i would recomend using an ottava (8va) or changing the clef

i posted my interpretation of this song here if u wanna c how i did.

[Meta-Ridley]

Thankyou for replying to this. It's been like 2 months (literally) since someones replied.

I was looking at your version of the Grandrayda theme and I think it was pretty good, execpt for a couple things like
the melody of the chorus (I know it doesn't have a chorus, but you get what i mean) and the the right hand at the beginning and as it continues.
It would be cool if we could merge the two to make a better one.

Also what do you think about my Metroid Prime Trilogy theme?? I'd like to know.

[Olimar12345]

just listened 2 ur mpt theme. wow, nicely done! my first thoughts upon opening it were "its (like most metroid prime songs) too dependent on percussion, it probably wont sound that good on piano(funny story-we tried to do the space pirate theme from mp1 a while back...) " However, you captured it very Professionally!

now with that in mind, lets see what we can do about having this put on the site-

-measure 12 has the same D written to be played with both hands-so erase one.
-dito for the C in measure 28
-careful on the higher range-i think u mannaged to write the absolute highest note for piano in measure 22
-47 to the end: most people dont have 3 hands... so 3 parts will be hard to play. i recomend cutting out the 1st and last notes from the middle line and write (L.H.) underneath it, letting the left hand play it.