[3DS] Tomodachi Life - "Food Mart" by majorasincarnation

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Tomodachi Life
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Food Mart
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: majorasincarnation

[Kyandokyan]

invisible barline beating my ass with this one   

i played my arrangement while transcribing it, the syncopation between hands is admittedly very tough, especially with the portato organ stabs, but is doable. making note of it just in case i should edit the accuracy in exchange for ease of playing LOL

[Metamyrrh]

It's a fun song! I have a handful of thoughts.

With a pickup measure, I believe you may shorten the last measure by the length of the pickup. This would also let you take out the repeat sign before m1.

Some changes that might make it easier to read: the RH in measures 10, 11, and 16 could be written in two voices to decrease the needed number of ties, and the LH throughout could be beamed over the eighth note rests (except over beat 3).

From beats 1.5 to 2.0 of the last measure, I hear the LH as similar to the previous measures, with an eighth note higher D (rather than the held lower D) on beat 1.5 and a lower D on beat 2.0.