[Wii] Wii Play - "Title Screen" by XiaoMigros

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Wii Play
Console: Wii
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: XiaoMigros

[XiaoMigros]

[Kricketune54]

• As opposed to hiding a full measure for the pickup, I would just shorten the pickup to 1/16 or 1/8 beat count.
• Counted tempo at q = 95
• m20 RH 1.25 hearing Eb
• m22 RH 1.0 hearing Dn and 1.25 hearing Eb

[XiaoMigros]

• As opposed to hiding a full measure for the pickup, I would just shorten the pickup to 1/16 or 1/8 beat count.

Going off what we discussed I'd prefer to keep this as is, to better allow for counting

• Counted tempo at q = 95

Fixed

• m20 RH 1.25 hearing Eb
• m22 RH 1.0 hearing Dn and 1.25 hearing Eb

Fixed too, but I really don't like how these measures aren't identical...

[Kricketune54]

Going off what we discussed I'd prefer to keep this as is, to better allow for counting

It's not a big deal but still seems like playback is treating this pickup as a 4 bar measure. Just is a weird playback delay.

Fixed too, but I really don't like how these measures aren't identical...

I blame Koji Kondo

Wii Play looks good!

[Latios212]

Why don't I remember this track despite definitely playing Wii Play? ;-; It's so cool and so evocative of the era. Sounds like something from MKDS which makes total sense given the composer...

It's not a big deal but still seems like playback is treating this pickup as a 4 bar measure. Just is a weird playback delay.

Hasn't this always been the case with pickup measures in Finale? Not that it's necessarily desirable.

Other feedback before I finish up, this looks really good. Nice work keeping the left hand in pretty narrow ranges to make playing easier
- The rolled chord at the end of m. 8 sounds to me like it actually falls on beat 1 of m. 9 instead
- Conversely, it does feel like the first note of the 16th run in m. 15 is actually held over from a strike at the end of m. 14!
- I think the last LH note in m. 9 is actually a Bb instead of a D, but I guess I'm fine leaving it as a D to keep the fingering simple? Wasn't sure if that was intentional
- I don't think the ties in m. 12 LH beat 1.5 are needed since the pedal is already here to sustain notes
- The A octave in m. 18 beat 2.5 sounds an octave lower - e.g. the melody dips down here instead of up
- I'm not sure I hear the first RH G in m. 19... it isn't as present as the other notes. I think I hear an Ab in the harmony here, does that sound too weird? vs. just keeping the G or maybe just omitting the RH here

[Kricketune54]

- I'm not sure I hear the first RH G in m. 19... it isn't as present as the other notes. I think I hear an Ab in the harmony here, does that sound too weird? vs. just keeping the G or maybe just omitting the RH here

I am not hearing an Ab in the harmony. Does not sound like it would fit. But I agree on relistening that the RH 1.0 Gn seems like it is not actually there.

[XiaoMigros]

- I'm not sure I hear the first RH G in m. 19... it isn't as present as the other notes. I think I hear an Ab in the harmony here, does that sound too weird? vs. just keeping the G or maybe just omitting the RH here

I opted for omitting it, everything else has been dealt with too!

[Latios212]

Sounds good! The changes look good to me so it's time to accept ^^

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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