[GCN] Super Monkey Ball 2 - "World 7 - Bubbly Washing Machine" by Static

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Super Monkey Ball 2
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: World 7 - Bubbly Washing Machine
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

[Latios212]

I can never predict what the heck you're going to submit next lol

Just one real piece of feedback:
- In the bassline of m. 1 and everywhere else that appears, I'm hearing the 16th notes as G-A-G instead of F-G-F
And a couple of tiny visual suggestions:
- The 2. over the repeat section could be moved left a tad to line up with the beat 1 notes
- The D.C. seems a little low and to the left

Great sheet!

[Static]

All those things have been fixed

[Latios212]

Terrific! Approved

[mastersuperfan]

The chords at the end of m2 RH Layer 2 also have a G in them.

Apart from that, notes look good, but... shouldn't the whole thing have swing 16ths?

[Static]

The chords at the end of RH Layer 2 also have a G in them.

Apart from that, notes look good, but... shouldn't the whole thing have swing 16ths?

- I tried to make (almost) everything able to be played with just the span of an octave, so I added the G in place of the C.
- I originally thought so too because of the drums at the beginning, but everything after that sounds like normal 16ths to me. The rhythm on beat 2 of each LH measure I think is what solidified that feel to me at least. Any other opinions on this?
- I also changed the rhythm on beat 3.5 RH layer 2 to a dotted quarter.

Files have been updated.

[Latios212]

Apart from that, notes look good, but... shouldn't the whole thing have swing 16ths?

- I originally thought so too because of the drums at the beginning, but everything after that sounds like normal 16ths to me. The rhythm on beat 2 of each LH measure I think is what solidified that feel to me at least. Any other opinions on this?

It sure sounds like the percussion is swung, but the notes... don't quite, I'm not really sure. I'm not the best at detecting swing rhythms, so take my opinion here with a grain of salt - but I think it's fine as Static wrote it.

[Static]

After talking with msf and listening again and experimenting a little, I think it really is slightly swung - very slightly. I've edited the sheet accordingly (note I purposely did not align the 16th triplets and 16th notes because this is not a triplet swing feel, it's much more subtle).

[mastersuperfan]

Looks good to me

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