[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Blub-Blub Ocean" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Blub-Blub Ocean
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

[Latios212]

Yay! It's been a while since our last new KEY sheet great job on this one!

- m. 12 is missing an E on beat 4 (LH)
- I think the last eighth rest in m. 13 should be moved up to the same height as the previous one
- Lower inner tie in m. 20 could probably have its left endpoint moved right a bit
- I think the chord in m. 20 should have an E in it (above the LH A).
- Measure 22 miiiight have an E in the same place on beat 1...
- I think the first chord in m. 23 is missing its seventh (A in LH)

[mastersuperfan]

All changes made!

[Static]

A couple more things:

- m10 LH is also missing an E on beat 4.
- m19 RH is missing a Cn on beat 2.5 (C augmented 7th in 3rd inversion aka C7#5/Bb)

[mastersuperfan]

A couple more things:

- m10 LH is also missing an E on beat 4.
- m19 RH is missing a Cn on beat 2.5 (C augmented 7th in 3rd inversion aka C7#5/Bb)

Got 'em

[Latios212]

Looks good

[Static]

The only other thing I have to say is that the text size on everything seems really small because you scaled the entire page down... It's not like you don't have room to make it a little larger, like 13 or 14pt.

Edit: I'd actually just scale everything up to 85%, 81% is just a little too small for reading Maestro font. I know it'll look a little more cramped but that's fine - you want people to be able to read the music easily. I know I'm guilty of making tiny music before, but I try to limit myself to 85% now after Libera suggested it awhile ago. When you actually print it out (or use one of those technological devices) and read it, it can really make a difference.

[mastersuperfan]

I scaled it down to 81% because I physically can't go any higher without overflowing onto two pages. I also don't like to go below 85% if I don't need to, but I found it preferable to having 1-2 systems and a bunch of empty space on a second page.

[mastersuperfan]

Scaled it up to 83%. I think this is good.

[Static]

I would still prefer 85%, but this is good enough. I know you really want to keep this on one page.

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