Th3Gavst3r's Replacements

[Th3Gavst3r]

[MUL] Duck Hunt

Title Screen

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[LeviR.star]

Oh thank goodness! We really needed this one, and I was gonna contact you about replacing it!

[Th3Gavst3r]

I'm glad you remembered, cause I almost forgot I had this xD

Maybe soon I'll submit the rest of the soundtrack too

[Latios212]

Maybe soon I'll submit the rest of the soundtrack too

rip lol at least we have one

I prefer this video... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80

Anyway, feedback! Pitches look good but those En/Gn on beat 3 should really be Dx (oof) and Fx as they chromatically neighbor the notes of the tonic chord (E# and G#). There's also an inconsistent interval of Dn and E# (Dn should be Cx) in m. 1 beat 2.5.

Actually, I think this sheet would be better written in Db major. Easier key signature and those chords would be the intuitive C major and Db major. You'd get a couple of double flats as the melody chromatically descends, but you could re-spell those as naturals that get flatted again on the next note. (i.e. Ab-Gn-Gb as opposed to Ab-Abb-Gb).

Also, the text is outside the top and bottom margins.

[Th3Gavst3r]

I prefer this video... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRcDpfR7o80

Updated

Actually, I think this sheet would be better written in Db major. Easier key signature and those chords would be the intuitive C major and Db major. You'd get a couple of double flats as the melody chromatically descends, but you could re-spell those as naturals that get flatted again on the next note. (i.e. Ab-Gn-Gb as opposed to Ab-Abb-Gb).

Went with the Db spellings and used the natural-flat chromatics. Very good improvements

Also, the text is outside the top and bottom margins.

Fixeded

[Latios212]

whee nice

[Static]

I don't really have anything else to say here... accepted. Looks great!