[SWITCH] Super Mario Odyssey - "Tostarena Ruins" by Static

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Odyssey
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Tostarena Ruins
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

I promised Latios I would submit this one, and if I don't right now I'll probably forget... so here it is.

[Latios212]

I promised Latios I would submit this one, and if I don't right now I'll probably forget... so here it is.

- Any reason why the RH isn't an octave up at the beginning?
- m. 9 and 13 have an unusually large amount of space added to the start
- I suggest writing in a dotted quarter in m. 26 beat 3 to condense things a bit
- I think m. 55 should just be a F# strike in the right hand instead of the tied over chord
- LH beat 4 in m. 42 sounds like it should be F#-C#
- Is the dyad in m. 57-58 an addition of yours? I don't hear it in the original, though it fits nicely. There's also some C#-F# offbeats in the bass clef you could add regardless that play with the RH offbeat notes.

Looks awesome, thanks for this one!

[Static]

- Any reason why the RH isn't an octave up at the beginning?

Nope, fixed.

- m. 9 and 13 have an unusually large amount of space added to the start

This was probably something from another sheet. I use older sheets as templates, but it can sometimes backfire like this lol

- I suggest writing in a dotted quarter in m. 26 beat 3 to condense things a bit

I made the middle 2 quarter notes a half note instead. I edited some other rhythms a bit too so everything is more consistent.

- I think m. 55 should just be a F# strike in the right hand instead of the tied over chord

Fixed.

- LH beat 4 in m. 42 sounds like it should be F#-C#

Fixed.

- Is the dyad in m. 57-58 an addition of yours? I don't hear it in the original, though it fits nicely. There's also some C#-F# offbeats in the bass clef you could add regardless that play with the RH offbeat notes.

There's an ambient F#maj chord that plays in the background of that part. I don't want to add the lower notes there so the LH part makes more of an impact in m59.

I also changed the title to just "Tostarena Ruins" since that is what it's named on the OST.

[Latios212]

Awesome, awesome. Approved!

[Libera]

Is this the first SMO sheet I've checked?

No.

Is it the last?

Maybe.


Looks pretty sweet just a few things:

-The url/page numbers/ subtitle aren't aligned to the margin.
-The harmony isn't included very consistently in 42-46.  It looks like it pretty much moves in fifths with the main line you've written in.
-The D.S. could be a little further from the staff.

[Static]

-The url/page numbers/ subtitle aren't aligned to the margin.
-The harmony isn't included very consistently in 42-46.  It looks like it pretty much moves in fifths with the main line you've written in.
-The D.S. could be a little further from the staff.

Fixed the first and third things, kept the harmonies the same in m42-46 since that's what that voice does. There are other notes too on beats 3-4 of some of those measures, but I left them out because they have different rhythms and I want to keep that section as clear and open as the rest of the sheet.

[Libera]

That's fair enough.  I'm happy here, happy enough to accept anyway.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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