[NES] Final Fantasy II - "Battle Theme 1" (Replacement) by Yug Guy

Started by Zeta, July 11, 2019, 07:06:05 PM

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Latios212

Looks pretty neat, just a few things to finish off:

- m. 18/22 RH: Ab->G# and Eb->D# (I think this was missed earlier). As such, remove the courtesy naturals in the subsequent measures
- Grace notes are causing beams to be disconnected between beats 3-4 in measures 4 and 8
- I'd recommend moving the top staff on page 2 away from the header/page number a bit
- Minor visual suggestion: flip the first group of notes in the RH of m. 19 and 23 to parallel the following ones
- For m. 5-6 and 9-10 I'd suggest keeping the rests on roughly the same horizontal level as the layers. Like this:
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Yug_Guy

Done, except for one small issue:

Quote from: Latios212 on July 31, 2019, 03:54:56 PM- For m. 5-6 and 9-10 I'd suggest keeping the rests on roughly the same horizontal level as the layers. Like this:
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I got the dotted eighth rests, but Finale won't let me separate the eighth rest on beat 3.5 and I don't know why.

Latios212

I gotcha. Fixed the files (just had to delete and re-input the rests a couple times, dunno why).
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