[SWITCH] Octopath Traveler - "The Riverlands" by Static

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Octopath Traveler
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: The Riverlands
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

[Latios212]

Great arrangement, I really like how the left hand of the A section turned out.

Double barline at m. 4 perhaps?

One suggestion I have is to keep the left hand notes above the bass in m. 29-36 (the fifth/sixth above it) in order to keep the same little "punch" from the previous section without demanding the large intervals. It's a bit bare with only the single notes.

I'd also recommend giving the top layer chords in m. 37-end another look, as I don't think the dyads best convey the thicker textures present in the original.

Awesome work again!

[Static]

Done, but I didn't add the double barline because the intro and melody section that comes right after are the same stylistically, and because the intro is so short.

[Latios212]

Sweet. Approved!

[Libera]

Looks great, just one thing: I think that the C#s in the low dyads in bars 31-32 should be Dns.  That is me assuming that they're meant to mirror the chords in 23-24, but I also think that the C#s don't sound right there.

[Latios212]

Oops. Yeah that's right

[Static]

Fixed.

[Libera]

Yay.

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