[SNES] Final Fantasy VI - "Town 2 (Unreleased Track)" by Static

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Submission Information:
Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy VI
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Town 2 (Unreleased Track)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

This track was released as part of the FFVI Special Tracks album.

[Latios212]

Ah, nice piece. Thanks for introducing me to it!

I do feel like this sheet would be better in 4/4 with note durations halved, but it's your decision.

Only other thing I have to say is that some of the ties in places like 19 and 29-30 are pretty crushed. Might want to poke those around a bit.

Anyway, here's an approval!

[Static]

I do feel like this sheet would be better in 4/4 with note durations halved, but it's your decision.

I felt this song as having a more quick pace, and when the bass drum comes in later on, I really feel it as a 2-beat pattern rather than 4.

Only other thing I have to say is that some of the ties in places like 19 and 29-30 are pretty crushed. Might want to poke those around a bit.

I messed around a bit here and in other spots, it should be a bit better now. Or at least, better than it was before.

In addition to this, I changed the F#s in measures 35 and 51 to As and the E in m39 to a G#.

[Libera]

So I agree with Latios on halving the note lengths, less so on it being in 4/4 (I think I don't really have a preference one way or the other).  But if you want to keep as you have then fair enough.

Other things:
-The ties don't look very even throughout and some of them are quite short on space.  It's probably caused by having so many measures per system, but the only way to alleviate that would be to go to three pages.  If you want to keep the distribution as is, you should got through and manually fix them (which will be a bit of a pain but I'm not sure what else you can do.)
For example of the 'unevenness'
this (bar 8):

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compared to this (bar 46)

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-The bar numbers are really huge compared to the rest of the sheet.  Not sure what's caused that...

Everything else looks fine to me.

[Static]

I think I'm still gonna keep the notes/timesig like I have it currently.

I actually originally had this on 3 pages, but it seemed like there was enough space to squish everything down to 2. I re-stretched the sheet though, so there's a lot more room for the ties.

[Libera]

That looks a lot better!

Accepting!

[Zeta]

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