FlamezofDeath's Arrangements

[Kaphita]

Red=in progress
Blue=finished, but needs polishing
Green=on site/completely finished

Okay, let's get this started!

There are too many a few things I've worked on since a while back and gave up on left unfinished, so I'd like to clean those up and post them here later.

For now though...

To the Moon

Having Lived: [PDF] [MID] [MUS]

Genshin Impact
Pure Sky: [PDF] [MID] [MUS]


(links broken for now; will fix later)

[Libera]

Ah I remember the To the Moon soundtrack now, it's very nice!

Sorry to see you haven't had any feedback yet, but I thought I'd check in now.  Now firstly there are a lot of formatting errors if you wanted to submit this to the site, but I won't really comment on those here.  You can go check out the formatting guidelines yourself if you want to submit this.  I'll instead give feedback on that actual arrangement:

-Ditch the octave up treble clef as it's not used in piano music.  Instead give a simple direction (RH 8va) or you can use the actual 8va symbols.
-You shouldn't really use dotted rests in 4/4, so change the one in bar 6.
-You have some very short notes that I feel would be better represented as grace notes, like in bar 6.  (Which would also remove the need for the dotted rest.)  Related to this is the fact that you use a lot of double dotted notes which I would advise against.  If you change the really short notes to graces you'll get rid of the need for those though.
-There's definitely something funny going on with the cross staffing.  You're cross staffing from standard treble to treble 8va which might have confused you?  I'd opt to get rid of the cross staffing in the left hand and just use ledger lines to preserve the contours of the lines.
-There is something particularly funny going on in bar 13 (I'm just going off of the pdf by the way since I know nothing about musescore.)  I think there's some hidden rests and multiple layers and everything looks a bit strange.  I'd try and write the right hand in one voice and not put the crotchet in the left hand.  Similarly I think you should write bar 16 with just one voice.
-Neaten up the ties in bar 18-19 and make the roll symbol line up a little more with the big chord (take some of the length away from the bottom of it.)

Hope that helps, and if you have any questions feel free to ask!