[NES] Sweet Home - "West Island" by Rwars

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: West Island
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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[Rwars]

[Sebastian]

Nice work! I'll double check the notes when I get home.

One thing I noticed formatting-wise: You don't have a dynamic.

[Olimar12345]

Nice Bob, job. Just a fre things:
-Composer/arranger names are not right aligned (they're off a bit). Also lower them a tad so that they're below the title and subtitle, like the picture in the Formatting Guidelines.
-I recommend getting rid of the large left margin. It's unnecessarily large, and you could utilize that spacing in your notation.
-Measure 13, 15, and 16's F naturals should be E#s. The harmony is D# minor, making E# the diatonic second scale degree (rather than F natural being the double-lowered third).
-Measure 14 and 16's C naturals should be B#s. The harmony is A#m13, making B# again the diatonic second scale degree, or the 9th.
-And yes, like Seb said you will need a dynamic marking. Probably mezzo piano or something similar.

This file contains the changes: https://www.dropbox.com/s/60za94ceq1tcl0x/westisland12345.mus?dl=1

[Rwars]

-Composer/arranger names are not right aligned (they're off a bit). Also lower them a tad so that they're below the title and subtitle, like the picture in the Formatting Guidelines.
-I recommend getting rid of the large left margin. It's unnecessarily large, and you could utilize that spacing in your notation.
-Measure 13, 15, and 16's F naturals should be E#s. The harmony is D# minor, making E# the diatonic second scale degree (rather than F natural being the double-lowered third).
-Measure 14 and 16's C naturals should be B#s. The harmony is A#m13, making B# again the diatonic second scale degree, or the 9th.
-And yes, like Seb said you will need a dynamic marking. Probably mezzo piano or something similar.

Added dynamics, fixed spelling and margins, and lowered names.

[Olimar12345]

You forgot to change the F natural in measure 16 to an E#. Also, remove the s from the https in the url.

[Rwars]

You forgot to change the F natural in measure 16 to an E#. Also, remove the s from the https in the url.

Double fixed.

[Sebastian]

I approve. More nice work, Rwars! : )

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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