[PC] Touhou 12: Undefined Fantastic Object - "Interdimensional Voyage of a Ghostly Passenger Ship" b

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Touhou 12: Undefined Fantastic Object
Console: PC
Title: Interdimensional Voyage of a Ghostly Passenger Ship
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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[Static]

A pretty long song with a very long title.

[Maelstrom]

m2 beat 3, LH - The 2nd En is a C (Also in 86)
m10 (and elsewhere, where the section repeats) LH beats 3,4 Sounds like a 5th (Db+Bb)
m11 (and elsewhere) LH beat 2 - I can't hear the bassline come back down to the Bb. You notated it as a 16th after the 8th.
m10 (B2), 11 (B4) (AE) LH - In each of these sets of 16th notes, I hear nothing where you notated the 3rd. It's just a rest in the original.
m69, 79, and the next system. The bassline isn't as simple as you made it sound. Listen again.

That's it for now.

As always, great arrangement.

[Static]

m2 beat 3, LH - The 2nd En is a C (Also in 86)

I'm not hearing the C, it just sounds like the En repeats.

m10 (and elsewhere, where the section repeats) LH beats 3,4 Sounds like a 5th (Db+Bb)

Fixed.

m11 (and elsewhere) LH beat 2 - I can't hear the bassline come back down to the Bb. You notated it as a 16th after the 8th.

I'm hearing the bassline go back down there, although its rather hard to hear.

m10 (B2), 11 (B4) (AE) LH - In each of these sets of 16th notes, I hear nothing where you notated the 3rd. It's just a rest in the original.

Again, these are super hard to hear, but they're there. Actually in measure 10 (and other measures like it), there's also a G in addition to the Dn, but I didn't include that to make the piece more playable.

m69, 79, and the next system. The bassline isn't as simple as you made it sound. Listen again.

I think what you're hearing is the bass drum or something rather than the bassline itself, which is what I have transcribed. I like your idea though, so I may go back and spice up the LH part there once I think of a nice way to implement the percussion accents.

Thanks for taking a look at the sheet!

[Latios212]

I'm not hearing the C, it just sounds like the En repeats.

Slowing it down a lot; I'm sure that the E is held for the duration of a half note. The C very faintly strikes on beat 4, not sure if it's worth including.

m11 (and elsewhere) LH beat 2 - I can't hear the bassline come back down to the Bb. You notated it as a 16th after the 8th.

I hear that.

Again, these are super hard to hear, but they're there. Actually in measure 10 (and other measures like it), there's also a G in addition to the Dn, but I didn't include that to make the piece more playable.

Not hearing those in the bass. Unless maybe they're from another voice in which case, seems fine.

I like your idea though, so I may go back and spice up the LH part there once I think of a nice way to implement the percussion accents.

Done or will do? This is close to being accepted.

[Static]

Not hearing those in the bass. Unless maybe they're from another voice in which case, seems fine.

I originally thought I heard those extra notes in the bassline, but I think it is another voice in the lower register that sounds similar. Either way, the notes are there and I left those them in.

I like your idea though, so I may go back and spice up the LH part there once I think of a nice way to implement the percussion accents.

I ended up deciding against this idea, mostly because I want bars 69-84 to match in style with bars 33-48. I don't think adding more notes to the LH there would make those sections is necessary.

Edit: Oh yeah, also I went through the arrangement again and did some quick note/chord fixes, so those should be good now.

[Latios212]

Measure 2/86 though?

Slowing it down a lot; I'm sure that the E is held for the duration of a half note. The C very faintly strikes on beat 4, not sure if it's worth including.

[Static]

Oops, sorry about that lol

I don't think the E is held down in those measures. I'm hearing the same dotted 8th-16th & 8th tie-8th rhythm as the notes above it.

Also, I'm still not really hearing the C? Idk it might be there, but I don't think it's worth notating because it's so faint.

[Static]

Sorry about that E lol, I was looking at the RH for some reason instead of the LH part.
Everything should be fixed now, including some minor note-flipping issues.

Thanks for the feedback/help on this one you guys!

[Latios212]

Yay! No problem!

[Maelstrom]

No problem; glad to help!

Accepted.

[Zeta]

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