[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Cozy Cabin" by Nebbles

Started by Zeta, February 29, 2016, 01:58:54 PM

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DonValentino


Nebbles

Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Shadoninja

because this sounds SOO much better than what we had before ::)
"And so my saga of quoting myself in everyone's signature continues" - dudeman

Sebastian

This is a lovely piece. Awesome job!
There are a couple things I'd like to point out:
- You added the pizz cello/bass from M. 19-33, but left it out from M. 3-18. I would recommend adding that? Totally optional though.
- The crescendo is clashing with the notes in M. 29 & 30. Maybe have the mp evenly lined up with the crescendo in M. 27 as well?
- The arranger/composer is mis-aligned very slightly.
- In the copyright info, I think we've been doing "publisher, developer", not "developer, publisher." I think you should do the former.

Again, this is very well done! Great job! : )

Forgive my "nitpickyness" haha.



Nebbles

Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Latios212

I'm trying to follow the conversation and I'm confused

How are we doing on this one?
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Nebbles

Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Nebbles

there it is updated

big thanks to ben for helping me finish it <3
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Latios212

My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
who needs education when you can have WAIFUS!!!!!

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Zeta

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