[PC] Five Nights at Freddy's 3 - "Shadow Bonnie Minigame (Stänchen)" by Sebastian

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Five Nights at Freddy's 3
Console: PC
Title: Shadow Bonnie Minigame (Stänchen)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian

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[Sebastian]

Some questions:
Should the composer be Schubert?
Is this the game title I should use? There isn't really any official soundtrack for this game.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8SPLxhKMPs&;

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

As far as the composer, I'd say it's like a transcription; so then it would be Schubert/Transcriber.

[Sebastian]

I thought Liszt was the transcriber and Schubert was the composer.

EDIT: Also, I assume the copyright info should be Scott Cawthon?

EDIT EDIT: I updated the file with the correct copyright info and took a note out of M. 2.

[Olimar12345]

-Add "(Stänchen)" to the title (see my fnaf arrangements for examples).
-"Composed by Franz Schubert & Franz Liszt"  Composer first, arranger second. The second line is for the arranger of this specific arrangement. Also, put he composers into two lines, with "& Franz Liszt" underneath.
-copyright info is fine.

[Sebastian]

-Add "(Stänchen)" to the title (see my fnaf arrangements for examples).

Ok. I wasn't sure if I was supposed to or not, but by judging mine with your FNaF arrangements, I guess I should've. Fixed.

-"Composed by Franz Schubert & Franz Liszt"  Composer first, arranger second. The second line is for the arranger of this specific arrangement. Also, put he composers into two lines, with "& Franz Liszt" underneath.

Sometimes I have trouble putting the ampersand on the second line. It worked this time, though.
Fixed.

-copyright info is fine.

I put "Scott Cawthon © 2015"
I'm pretty sure it's not "Nintendo © 2015" (what I previously had).

I love how Scott Cawthon uses classical songs in these games. It's so cool

Links and title updated.

[Sebastian]

Anything else for this sheet?

[Olimar12345]

Not sure yet. I haven't even looked at it/listened to it.

[Olimar12345]

-Measure 2, RH up-beat of three should be (from low to high) Ab Fb. The dotted quarter that it leads to should be only Bb Gb.
-Measure 8, RH should have an Eb quarter note in the staff (same that follows it). Same thing in measure 10.
-Add an Ab under the C in measures 8 and 10 LH dotted half notes.
-Measure 7's LH should look like measure 9's LH (less one note). The low Gb in mm. 3's LH is mia in that recording too, so I would remove it from the sheet.
-It would also be nice if you incorporated some of the stylistic markings that Liszt/Schubert used, such as:
  -an indication to utilize the pedal
  -an accent on all dotted quarter notes
  -a slur on all dotted quarter notes to the following note


I'm tired, that's all I can find for now.

[Sebastian]

-Measure 2, RH up-beat of three should be (from low to high) Ab Fb. The dotted quarter that it leads to should be only Bb Gb.

I'm positive I hear other notes in there, but whatever.
Fixed.

-Measure 8, RH should have an Eb quarter note in the staff (same that follows it). Same thing in measure 10.

I didn't add this because it sounded like an echo of the same note, but I'll go ahead and add it.
Fixed.
Also, the quarter in measure 10 is an Fb, not Eb.

-Add an Ab under the C in measures 8 and 10 LH dotted half notes.

Again, I didn't add this because it's an octave lower (Ab below middle C) and since there are other Abs being played. I guess I'll go ahead and add it. It doesn't seem like that big of a deal to me.
Fixed.

-Measure 7's LH should look like measure 9's LH (less one note). The low Gb in mm. 3's LH is mia in that recording too, so I would remove it from the sheet.

Haha, how ironic. You want me to remove a note (M 7 beat 1.0) that is there in the original which is an octave lower (brought up an octave for the sheet) and add a note just like this one in another measure (M. 8 & 10 left hand beat 1) that I left out...
If anything, I should add the note in M. 9 (beat 1.0 left hand).

-It would also be nice if you incorporated some of the stylistic markings that Liszt/Schubert used, such as:
  -an indication to utilize the pedal
  -an accent on all dotted quarter notes
  -a slur on all dotted quarter notes to the following note

Actually, that'd be cool to add these things from the original composition. Fixed.

[Olimar12345]

I detect sass. This should be fun~

(mm. 2 RH up-beat of three)
I'm positive I hear other notes in there, but whatever.
Fixed.

You're most likely hearing either the overtones or the sustained pitches previously played, but at that point no other pitches are being introduced.

(mm. 8 & 10 RH)
I didn't add this because it sounded like an echo of the same note, but I'll go ahead and add it.
Fixed.

It is not an echo. If it was an echo, then you might also hear the same thing in measure four where there are only dotted half notes as well. No beat three articulation there.

Also, the quarter in measure 10 is an Fb, not Eb.

Measure 10 is an Eb. I said that because that was what it was. This needs to be fixed.

(mm. 8 & 10 LH)
Again, I didn't add this because it's an octave lower (Ab below middle C) and since there are other Abs being played. I guess I'll go ahead and add it. It doesn't seem like that big of a deal to me.
Fixed.

Ab is in the bass (below middle C, yes), so why would you invert the chord? Keep Ab the lowest voice if possible (which it is). 

Haha, how ironic. You want me to remove a note (M 7 beat 1.0) that is there in the original which is an octave lower (brought up an octave for the sheet) and add a note just like this one in another measure (M. 8 & 10 left hand beat 1) that I left out...
If anything, I should add the note in M. 9 (beat 1.0 left hand).

Badly worded, so I am not sure what exactly what you were trying to say. Anyway, listening to it again, I do hear them way down there. This is fine.

Actually, that'd be cool to add these things from the original composition. Fixed.

?? okay..good.

[Sebastian]

Badly worded, so I am not sure what exactly what you were trying to say. Anyway, listening to it again, I do hear them way down there. This is fine.

Thought so.

Measure 10 is an Eb. I said that because that was what it was. This needs to be fixed.

Whoops, I meant measure 8. You're correct.


Ok, I'm 100% I hear this for M. 3

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Ok, everything is updated. Only thing is the chord in measure 3.

[Olimar12345]

Whoops, I meant measure 8. You're correct.

Measure 8 is also Eb. Both places are Eb. That's why I said that the first time. -__-

Ok, I'm 100% I hear this for M. 3

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you're 100% incorrect! :D

You're most likely hearing either the overtones or the sustained pitches previously played, but at that point no other pitches are being introduced.

-Measure 2, RH up-beat of three should be (from low to high) Ab Fb. The dotted quarter that it leads to should be only Bb Gb.

it should look like this:

[Sebastian]

you're 100% incorrect!

Whatever. I know I hear it.
Fixed.

it should look like this:

Fixed.

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