[NDS] Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version - "Battle! (Cheren/Bianca)" (Replacement) by JDM

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Battle! (Cheren/Bianca)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: JDMEK5


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[JDMEK5]

[Latios212]

You make the best gen 5 sheets. Noice.

- m. 16 and similar - is the eighth rest in layer 1 necessary? It kind of gets in the way of the slurs and I notice you don't have it in 22.
- m. 23-24 - shift the layer 2 quarter notes to the left just a tad so it doesn't overlap.
- m. 25 - the slur overlaps the articulation.
- m. 28 - remove the high A? Or otherwise make it playable.
- m. 31 - move the system down a bit.
- m. 33-34 - RH plays p instead of mf. (only affects playback, but yeah).

[JDMEK5]

You make the best gen 5 sheets. Noice.

I have a dream... To get all the crappy B/W sheets out.

*Fixes and stuffs*

I'll get to that when I get the chance. Prob won't be long cuz reading week next week. Wheee

[JDMEK5]

- m. 16 and similar - is the eighth rest in layer 1 necessary? It kind of gets in the way of the slurs and I notice you don't have it in 22.

I need an eighth rest in one of the layers so I made them all look like 22 cuz that seemed most appropriate.

- m. 28 - remove the high A? Or otherwise make it playable.

I put parentheses around it to indicate that it doesn't need to be played and therefore gives what I recommend as the best option (that is, omitting it), but also leaves freedom for whatever the player wants to do as well as what they can do. Maybe they want to use their nose to get it (I've done that before). It lets them know what's going on and gives them the power to do what they want with it.

As for everything else I fixed it all as you suggested.

[Bespinben]

BespinLatiosFan approves (^o^)=b

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