[WiiU] Super Mario Maker - "Airship (Super Mario Bros.)" by WandringMinstrel

Started by Zeta, October 24, 2015, 05:27:48 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Maker
Console: Wii U
Title: Airship (Super Mario Bros.)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WandringMinstrel

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WandringMinstrel

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Bespinben

In every place you have written a single note in the RH without harmony, there is indeed a harmony (ex: m. 3-6, & 9-12). When the harmony note is unison with the melody, it should be double-stemmed for the sake of voice preservation.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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WandringMinstrel

I know there are the same number of voices there, I excluded it because it was the same note as in the bass; for the sake of the performer, it seemed unnecessary. In other words, the harmony in those spots is not the same note as the melody, but a C in unison with the bass voice. Cross-beaming in this instance is unsightly, and while I could include it in the upper staff (in parentheses), again, it seemed unnecessary. But if you would like me to include the lower C harmony in parentheses in the upper staff for voice conservation, I can do that.
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WandringMinstrel

On second thought, that might suggest to some players to use an inconvenient fingering. I'll try some things out, let me know your thoughts.
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Bespinben

Quote from: WandringMinstrel on November 08, 2015, 06:39:42 PMOn second thought, that might suggest to some players to use an inconvenient fingering. I'll try some things out, let me know your thoughts.
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Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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WandringMinstrel

Played around with it, but keeping all three voices gets messy quick.


I still think my original version is the cleanest, and I don't feel showing all three voices all of the time is really necessary in this instance. As always, feedback is welcome.
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Bespinben

Those screenshots are in a locked folder, so I can't view them.

That said, if you think you're first draft is good, I'm fine with that. It meets the requirements.
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WandringMinstrel

I think I fixed it. At any rate, I do think that what I submitted is the best looking version, but I'm still open to suggestions in case I missed something.
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