Oqueo's Arrangements (FIRST/NEW: Solatorobo - Shetland Mine)

[Oqueo34]

Hi, I'm Oqueo and I'm new in this forum. I've been using this site for a long time and I think it's about time I try to help arranging some songs. Probably not a lot of people know about this game, but I think it has some really good music. The one I arranged is my favorite.
For transcribing I've used Musescore, mainly because it's free, but I converted it to .mus using Finale Notepad.
I wanted to know if this is good enough or if I should change something.
Also, I don't know how to format links, if someone could help me with that too, that would be great.
Solatorobo: Red The Hunter

Shetland Mine:
MID:
    https://www.dropbox.com/s/hti9izx1htvxtan/Shetland_Mine.mid?dl=1
MUS:
    https://www.dropbox.com/s/aesk18bvzf0j9dy/Shetland_Mine.mus?dl=1
PDF:
    https://www.dropbox.com/s/da9xxtzf0mfqlmi/Shetland_Mine.pdf?dl=1
YOUTUBE VIDEO TO THE ORIGINAL SONG:
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TU6tAdHmXZs

[Latios212]

Hey there, welcome to NinSheetMusic! Cool piece; what you have here is a pretty solid first attempt. A couple of things to look out for with the sheet as currently written:
- Lots of overlap between the left and right hand in the first page. You may want to consider lowering the left hand part an octave.
- For the second half, it isn't clear where the melody is vs. the accompanying 16th notes. You should definitely use multiple layers there so the performer knows which are the melody notes to emphasize.