[PC] Minecraft - "Creator" by Wuuthrad

Started by Zeta, June 19, 2024, 10:26:26 PM

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Wuuthrad

Fixed!

(I'm using Musescore to Finale Notepad for updating and have to manually put in slurs so I'll add them back for the final submission)

goldenscruff

m1 You can add a Con Pedale text to let the performer its okay to add pedal.

m24 I'm hearing the LH as An, F#D# D#Bn

m27 I'm hearing the cello go An Gn, and the accordian doing EG diads. I would suggest just EG diads.

m28 I hear a F# b3 in the piano that should be added to the LH.

m32 Is there a reason why the F# in the LH is not down the octave?
m32 I'm hearing b2 and b3 as the same as in m24 (F#D#, D#Bn)

To have a consistent feel I think m33 and m34 should be diads with the same notes as the current broken diads.

m36 I hear the bass go down an octave b2

In m43 if you can use Ctrl + Shift + Up in musescore to move the LH notes up the RH and hide the crotchet rest that would be better I think.

m52 Instead of the En Bn En small notes, I think adding the accordian  doing Gn F# Gn Bn En would be better.

Wuuthrad

Quote from: goldenscruff on February 26, 2025, 11:21:00 PMm1 You can add a Con Pedale text to let the performer its okay to add pedal.

m27 I'm hearing the cello go An Gn, and the accordian doing EG diads. I would suggest just EG diads.

m28 I hear a F# b3 in the piano that should be added to the LH.

m32 Is there a reason why the F# in the LH is not down the octave?
m32 I'm hearing b2 and b3 as the same as in m24 (F#D#, D#Bn)

To have a consistent feel I think m33 and m34 should be diads with the same notes as the current broken diads.

m36 I hear the bass go down an octave b2

m52 Instead of the En Bn En small notes, I think adding the accordian  doing Gn F# Gn Bn En would be better.
Fixed these!

Quote from: goldenscruff on February 26, 2025, 11:21:00 PMm24 I'm hearing the LH as An, F#D# D#Bn
Didn't know if these should've been sixths or thirds, I have thirds for now to keep it as the same pattern. 

Quote from: goldenscruff on February 26, 2025, 11:21:00 PMIn m43 if you can use Ctrl + Shift + Up in musescore to move the LH notes up the RH and hide the crotchet rest that would be better I think.
Added this as part of voice 2 in the first staff, it defaulted to the following when I did the ctrl+shift+up which I wasn't sure if you meant.