Fantastic Ike's Aquatic Update Sheets

[Kricketune54]

Deep Sea Bass (Coral Riff)
• m2, 6, and m10 the Bn's in the LH on beat 4 look a little better visually as Cb's
• m16, m18, m20 I'd recommend putting the 2nd voice rests up to the standard rest height, just lines up a bit better in this case with the rest of the note in the voice (as opposed to just having consistent rest height for the whole arrangement).

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And in closing, just a few more adjustments to the spacing on page one.

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Koopa Troopa Beach
• "Square Enix" in the copyright can be written with just first letters capitalized

• m24 and m32 RH you could move the 1st voice half rest down so it lines up like this:

I don't think this got addressed
• m24 and m32 you could move that 2nd voice, first 8th rest up a little more

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•m53-56 you could move the cresc. down a little to ligne up more with the sfz at m56

All minor visual stuff though that can be done before next reviewer, Koopa Troopa Beach has my approval

[Fantastic Ike]

I don't think this got addressed
• m24 and m32 you could move that 2nd voice, first 8th rest up a little more

Whoops, I thought I fixed it but I read the original post wrong.

Both should be updated now.

[Kricketune54]

Okay great. I will now approve Deep Sea Bass, just also make sure before next review to fix m16 and m20 RH 2nd voice. At least on my end the half rest is not hidden and is clipping through the 8th note stems of the first voice.

[Fantastic Ike]

Oh, now I see it. Tricky to notice, all updated. Thanks!