Feedback Requested: Party At Joe's from Rayman 1

[Fernman]

Hello,

Would someone be willing to give me feedback on my Party At Joe's arrangment from Rayman 1?
I am certain the rhythms are not correct in the early part of the song, but I'm not sure how to fix it. It sounds correct, but I'm sure it is not the best way to write it.

I'll worry about proper ninsheet formatting and layout once the music notation is at a almost final stage.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1cRspZUjSyIAj8fasDW2Qza0NnE9uii65?usp=sharing

UPDATED 6-16-23

I would appreciate any feedback.
Rayman 1 on the Sega Saturn was one of my favorite childhood games.
Thank you!

[Comenat]

Hello,

Would someone be willing to give me feedback on my Party At Joe's arrangment from Rayman 1?
I am certain the rhythms are not correct in the early part of the song, but I'm not sure how to fix it. It sounds correct, but I'm sure it is not the best way to write it.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1cRspZUjSyIAj8fasDW2Qza0NnE9uii65?usp=sharingduck life

I would appreciate any feedback.
Rayman 1 on the Sega Saturn was one of my favorite childhood games.
Thank you!

I enjoyed playing Rayman 1.