[GB] Balloon Kid - "Boss Defeated" by Jacopo Tore

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Balloon Kid
Console: Game Boy
Title: Boss Defeated
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jacopo Tore

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[JacopoTore]

[LeviR.star]

These are just things I noticed glancing at the PDF:

- I think it'd be good to include the intro, yes? It only plays after bosses and before the looping track you've transcribed, so I think it's worth having on the sheet
- copyright info should read as follows: Nintendo, Pax Softnica © 1990
- the sheet's title is fine, but the word "defeated" in the submission title needs to be capitalized

[JacopoTore]

These are just things I noticed glancing at the PDF:

- I think it'd be good to include the intro, yes? It only plays after bosses and before the looping track you've transcribed, so I think it's worth having on the sheet
- copyright info should read as follows: Nintendo, Pax Softnica © 1990
- the sheet's title is fine, but the word "defeated" in the submission title needs to be capitalized

ok thank you! I will do it

[Static]

The intro can be it's own "Boss Defeated Fanfare" sheet, though I don't really mind either way.

- m8 RH beat 4 should be F# instead of A#
- Still missing the Pax Softnica in the copyright. Should be "Nintendo, Pax Softnica © 1990" as Levi said.


Also, if you want, you can remove the natural signs in the key change. You can do this in Document > Document Options > Key Signatures > uncheck "Cancel outgoing key signature".

[LeviR.star]

The intro can be it's own "Boss Defeated Fanfare" sheet, though I don't really mind either way.

I don't think that's necessary, Static, I fit it into one sheet just fine. My sheet may be a little old, but the intro is only three extra measures, bringing it up to four systems that fit nice and snug on the page. And I'm pretty sure the faux "snare roll" in the noise channel indicates they're part of the same piece. I mean, why else would they never play separate from each other in-game?

Up to you guys, of course. But as someone who knows this OST inside-and-out, I think we're missing out on an opportunity here.

[JacopoTore]

The intro can be it's own "Boss Defeated Fanfare" sheet, though I don't really mind either way.

- m8 RH beat 4 should be F# instead of A#
- Still missing the Pax Softnica in the copyright. Should be "Nintendo, Pax Softnica © 1990" as Levi said.


Also, if you want, you can remove the natural signs in the key change. You can do this in Document > Document Options > Key Signatures > uncheck "Cancel outgoing key signature".

Did it

[Static]

Looks good

[Bloop]

-m2: I hear the L.H. in beats 4-6 as legato instead of staccato.
-m3: It's probably best to add a double barline at the end of this measure, since these first 3 measures are pretty much its own section.
-m4-11: You could consider removing the ties from the Eb and F# in the L.H., so that they will be more present in later measures and so that the major seconds are more audible.
-Maybe you could rise all systems up a bit, as there's a lot of room between the arranger info and the first system, but very little between the copyright info and the last system.

[JacopoTore]

-m2: I hear the L.H. in beats 4-6 as legato instead of staccato.
-m3: It's probably best to add a double barline at the end of this measure, since these first 3 measures are pretty much its own section.
-m4-11: You could consider removing the ties from the Eb and F# in the L.H., so that they will be more present in later measures and so that the major seconds are more audible.
-Maybe you could rise all systems up a bit, as there's a lot of room between the arranger info and the first system, but very little between the copyright info and the last system.

Ok did it, for the ties I prefer to leave, thank you

[Bloop]

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