[MUL] NieR: Automata - "Faltering Prayer (Starry Sky)" by Libera

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Submission Information:
Series: Drakengard/NieR
Game: NieR: Automata
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Faltering Prayer (Starry Sky)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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[Libera]

[XiaoMigros]

This is really pretty (track and the sheet, I enjoyed reading along). There is hardly anything to be improved on here, so here's some nitpicky words from me:

• For measures 25-26 it might be helpful to write the notes played by the LH in a second layer, or to use brackets or something similar, to show a clearer distinction as to what notes are played by each hand
• Maybe you could simplify the ottava in the RH so it doesn't appear over every system, one does get the idea after a while lol.

[Libera]

This is really pretty (track and the sheet, I enjoyed reading along).

Thanks!

I think it's very clear which notes you are meant to play with the left hand in 25-26 so I don't really see the need for adding in additional notation there.

I guess I could hide the 8va, but I haven't done that in the past on similar sheets because it's not like we're short on space.  It means you're less likely to make a mistake if you started playing further down the page, for example.  If we were short on space, then I'd be much more likely to hide it here.

Thanks for having a look though.

[Latios212]

Looks great! The only thing I have is - m. 14 beat 4 sounds like it should be an octave.

[Libera]

Yeah that sounds right.  Files updated.  Thanks!

[Latios212]

Neato, looks good!

[Static]

Well, I'm not finding anything to say here... This looks really good. I'll accept

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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