[NES] Circus Charlie - "Stage 2" by Jacopo Tore

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Circus Charlie
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Stage 2
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jacopo Tore

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[JacopoTore]

[Latios212]

Nice work! Some feedback:
- YouTube comments indicate that this is based on "Walking in the King's Highway" by Florence Horton, so similar to your other submission the composer/arranger credits need to be adjusted.
- There's too much space between the header and the first system; move the first system up.
- You have a couple of beams randomly disconnected - reconnect them in m. 2 and 10 LH beats 3-4, and m. 7 RH beats 3-4.
- m. 12 RH should be a 16th tied to a quarter, instead of quarter tied to a 16th. (To show beat 3)
- I think the second half would be better written in C major (blank key signature) with a double barline at the end of m. 8.
- Missing the copyright symbol between Konami and 1986. (Same for your other sheet)

[JacopoTore]

Nice work! Some feedback:
- YouTube comments indicate that this is based on "Walking in the King's Highway" by Florence Horton, so similar to your other submission the composer/arranger credits need to be adjusted.
- There's too much space between the header and the first system; move the first system up.
- You have a couple of beams randomly disconnected - reconnect them in m. 2 and 10 LH beats 3-4, and m. 7 RH beats 3-4.
- m. 12 RH should be a 16th tied to a quarter, instead of quarter tied to a 16th. (To show beat 3)
- I think the second half would be better written in C major (blank key signature) with a double barline at the end of m. 8.
- Missing the copyright symbol between Konami and 1986. (Same for your other sheet)

Did it!
Thank you!

[Latios212]

Great! Last thing:

- You have a couple of beams randomly disconnected - reconnect them in m. 2 and 10 LH beats 3-4, and m. 7 RH beats 3-4.

I only meant this in the places I pointed out; the rest were fine before. In particular, measures 3 and 15 RH should be disconnected between beats 3-4. (This is because there's a 16th note rhythm there.)

[JacopoTore]

Great! Last thing:
I only meant this in the places I pointed out; the rest were fine before. In particular, measures 3 and 15 RH should be disconnected between beats 3-4. (This is because there's a 16th note rhythm there.)

Sorry!!!
Ok I did it

[Latios212]

No worries. Looks good

[JacopoTore]

No worries. Looks good

<3

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