[PS1] Xenogears - "Our Wounded Bodies Shall Advance Towards the Light" by Libera

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Xeno
Game: Xenogears
Console: PlayStation
Title: Our Wounded Bodies Shall Advance Towards the Light
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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[Libera]

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[Latios212]

Nice piece! I'm slowly getting familiar with the Xenogears soundtrack through these sheets...

A few small things:
- m. 27 top voice beat 1, I hear an E here (similar to m. 31)
- The D.S. at the end could be pushed a little further right closer to the barline
- I think m. 28 RH might look nice in three layers due to the different contours of the top and bottom part, and it would also remove the need for any offset due to the whole note:
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[Libera]

Yep those changes look good to me.  I also edited the positioning of the first note because it looked pretty weird.  Files updated.

[Latios212]

Looks gooood

[Static]

Looks pretty great, not much to say really

• m24 RH: While I hear the G on beat 1 in the top voice, I also hear one of the inner voices move from F# to G on beat 2. Up to you whether you want to restrike the G there, but that beat sounds a little empty to me without it.
• m26/29 LH: The Gs here should be an octave higher; the bass only drops to the low G in the final measure.

[Libera]

Both of those changes sound good to me.  Files updated.  Thanks for checking!

[Static]

Nice, I'll accept now

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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