[MUL] Doki Doki Literature Club Plus! - "My Song, Your Note" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Doki Doki Literature Club Plus!
Console: Multiplatform
Title: My Song, Your Note
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

[Latios212]

What a calming song for a wholesome game~

- Pedal direction (con pedale)?
- Thoughts about delaying the low E in m. 3 by one beat? That way you can focus on hitting the rest of the notes including the C in layer 2... and in the original the E fades in and isn't really audible on beat 1
- I think the G chords in m. 12 and 16 sound like they should be inverted downwards once

In m. 5-8 I hear a voice do this (this is the same voice in the lower staff in m. 3-4)
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Did you raise this an octave? It's almost completely lost within the RH chords, but I guess that's okay if you want to prioritize the bass (which is quite quiet in the original but admittedly important)

[mastersuperfan]

What a calming song for a wholesome game~

- Pedal direction (con pedale)?
- Thoughts about delaying the low E in m. 3 by one beat? That way you can focus on hitting the rest of the notes including the C in layer 2... and in the original the E fades in and isn't really audible on beat 1
- I think the G chords in m. 12 and 16 sound like they should be inverted downwards once

In m. 5-8 I hear a voice do this (this is the same voice in the lower staff in m. 3-4)
You cannot view this attachment.
Did you raise this an octave? It's almost completely lost within the RH chords, but I guess that's okay if you want to prioritize the bass (which is quite quiet in the original but admittedly important)

Updated the files!

[Latios212]

Looks terrific, approved!

[Static]

The only thing I have to say is that, the very last note sounds like it's just octaves to me. The G is an overtone and not actually played.

[mastersuperfan]

The only thing I have to say is that, the very last note sounds like it's just octaves to me. The G is an overtone and not actually played.

got

[Static]

I guess this means I'll have to do this

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