[SWITCH] Hyrule Warriors: Age of Calamity - "A Quiet Moment" by XiaoMigros

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Submission Information:
Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: Hyrule Warriors: Age of Calamity
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: A Quiet Moment
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: XiaoMigros

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[Khunjund]

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[XiaoMigros]

Hi!

That makes sense, I'll be sure to do so in the future.

[Latios212]

Nice work! This is looking good.

I'll help iron out the formatting stuff later, but a few pieces of feedback about the arrangement itself for now:
- The lower layer notes in m. 9 and 13 should tie over to the next measure. Measures 11-12 are also missing a Gb that's part of that same voice bridging the gap between the Ab and F.
- Similarly, m. 15-16 should have a Gb tied over to fill in the lower layer. Measures 17-18 should have the Ab tied over, and m. 19-20 should have Gb and F.
- Eb at the first ending should have a C below it, just like the measure above it.
- For the low extra notes in the left hand, I would suggest writing them like this instead of just having them be an eighth note on beat 1 of alternate measures:
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- m. 22's beat 1 in the left hand should be Gb instead of Bb.
- m. 25-26 second left hand notes should be Gb instead of Db.

Is the second ending a custom ending you wrote?

[XiaoMigros]

Thanks for your feedback!

As I tend to do more transcribing most of my arrangements are... "unpolished", to say the least. What you've pointed out seems reasonable and I'll fix those errors. The second ending is a custom ending I added, do you want that removed or not?

[Latios212]

You're welcome, here to help The custom ending is fine to keep if you want. Let me know if you have any other questions about the above.

[Latios212]

Hey, in the future it would help if you posted when you updated the sheet to let us know I just noticed that you made some edits after my last post.

I fixed up the formatting as well as a few other things:
- Don't need the forward repeat bar at the front
- Flipped Rh melody note up in m. 14
- Added the Gb in m. 15-16 I mentioned above
- Use two quarter rests instead of a half rest in 3/4 time
- Tied lower layer between m. 21-22
- Split m. 23 into two layers so the lower layer couple be tied over. Same with 25-26
- Moved the last note to the RH

Here's the file, let me know if everything looks good to you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/douin1zmukg49k3/A%20Quiet%20Moment.mus?dl=1

(Also we should figure out what to do with m. 21-24 lowest later so the performer knows to restrike the bass notes instead of hold them, but I don't have any bright ideas at the moment)

[XiaoMigros]

Hey! From now on I'll say when I've updated the sheet then, if I don't forget that is🙃
 - By default I add forward repeat bars, I have no clue why and I know you don't need them, but I'll try to remove them in the future
- The other edits you've made look good to me, I'll update the submission after I've posted this
The only thing that comes to mind for measures 21-24 is to make the ties dotted? Though I think that might be a bit unclear to the performer. I'll have a think but otherwise I could always remove the tie completely (that isn't optimal either).

[XiaoMigros]

While going over the piece again I fixed up a few more minor things:
 - I wrote whole-measure rests in the right hand's 1st voice as such instead of their literal value (dotted half).
 - I moved the Gb in Measures 11-12 into the second voice to emphasise the lesser significance of this note, and to show it is a continuation of the second voice from the previous two measures.
Thank you to all the updaters for your time and patience!

[Latios212]

Cool, I've made sure your files are updated with that and formatting ^^

Approving this one!

[Maelstrom]

Great work, accepting

[Zeta]

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