[MUL] Celeste - "Little Goth" by AcceptedSugar

[mastersuperfan]

Looks great! A few last things:
- Super nitpicky, but in m32, I would move the rall. slightly down so that it's more centered between the two staves (right now, it's a little high up).
- m41, add a period to the end of "poco a poco accel. e cresc." (cresc --> cresc.) You can also move this expression a little more to the left, since the right edge is close to the barline.
- m48 isn't spaced correctly with the clef. Just click on a note in m48 using the Simple Entry Tool and it should re-space automatically.
- m49, I'd move the mf slightly up and to the left so that it's not so close to the LH stem.
- In m53-54 and m55-56, move the 8va a little higher since it's nearly clashing with the RH stems in m53/55.
- In m64, I would write the LH whole note as simply a half note since it sounds like the pedal lifts on beat 3.

- I left it at 5 pages; shrinking it down to 4 made the octaves cramped hard to read with the clef change in my opinion... is this okay?

Hmm, I personally don't think it's cramped or hard to read at all with 4 measures per system. I think it's less awkward than having the last page be mostly empty. If you want, though, I can ask for a third opinion.

[AcceptedSugar]

Okay! All changes are up to date!

Thanks again

[mastersuperfan]

- You can also move this expression a little more to the left, since the right edge is close to the barline.
- m48 isn't spaced correctly with the clef. Just click on a note in m48 using the Simple Entry Tool and it should re-space automatically.

These two still! Let me know if you're having trouble with m48.

You could also move the tempo marking at the beginning slightly down, closer to the staff.

That's it!

[AcceptedSugar]

Okay, I think it's all fixed!

idk why m48 was acting so weird lol

[mastersuperfan]

aaaaa last thing

The half rest in m64 should be moved down more, like this:

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[mastersuperfan]

hooray

[Zeta]

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