[3DS] Pokémon X & Pokémon Y - "I'll Go With You" by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon X & Pokémon Y
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: I'll Go With You
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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[Latios212]

At long last, the first out of the 3 parts of the Pokémon XY ending sequence.

[Libera]

Hey look it quotes Kiseki at the end, sweet.

Generally looks pretty solid, just a few things for me to say.

-There are a few places that are missing movement from the original, which isn't the end of the world but it just makes some of the bars feel a bit empty.  Particularly I noticed bar 12, 15, 47 and 48.
-Sounds like there's a small rit in bar 54 that you're missing.
-Bring the layer 1 rest in bar 40 down a bit?  (same for bar 16.)
-The decrescendo in bar 24 doesn't make any sense since you can't do any dynamic change on a held note.  Same in bar 48.
-Bring the 8va at the end a little more to the left to better cover that first crotchet?

At long last, the first out of the 3 parts of the Pokémon XY ending sequence.

Congratulations!  And nice work. :P

[Latios212]

Thank you! ^^

I implemented all of your suggested changes except the first. I'm not sure I hear any additional movement in the original in those places, at least not something that isn't very subtle. I want to leave it as is, but as I'm not exactly sure what you're referring to feel free to draw out a suggestion for me to consider!

[Libera]

We had a chat about that last point and Latios wants to keep it as is, which is alright by me.

Approved.

[Maelstrom]

Great sheet.                                                            accepted

[Zeta]

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