[NDS] Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version - "Opelucid City (Pokémon White)" (Replacement)

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Black Version & Pokémon White Version
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Opelucid City (Pokémon White)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Joel Hands-Otte


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Edit (existing arranger remains)

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[Latios212]

Dug this up from fingerz's thread - he had fixed up his sheet some time ago but the revision never made it to the main site - and checked it.

[Libera]

Notes look pretty good to me.  Just got a few comments:

-The left hand beaming is all over the place.  It might have been some sort of conversion thing?  Certainly something needs to be done about it to make it more consistent as at the moment I'd really say it's impeding readability.
-mf in bar 1 goes to mf in bar ...
-There are no bar numbers.
-Back to the previous comment, it goes to mf in the second bar of page 2.  I guess it should be something more like mp -> mf or p -> mf?
-I'd drop the lower semiquaver on the seventh note of the last bar of the third page's third system's left hand.  As in:

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Edit: Something else I noticed while I was out is that in a lot of places the ties are quite scrunched and could do with some aesthetic tweaking, kind of all over the sheet really.

[Latios212]

All good points, implemented~ (redistributed measures a bit for the last one)

[Libera]

Great, accepting!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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