[PC] Deltarune - "THE WORLD REVOLVING" by ThatHiddenCharacter

[Libera]

-I don't think the off beats change with the bass in bar 4.  But I can see why you might want to have what you've written.  Let me know your thinking here.

This still.  The other edits look good!

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Alright, fixed it. Files updated. (I must've accidentally looked over that when reading the stuff.)

[Libera]

Updated with some minor formatting fixes from Levi at THC's request.  I approve.

[Maelstrom]

m7:

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Not to kill your hypermeter or anything, but the 2nd repeat on the top of the 2nd page is actually 2 measures, not one. m25 is actually different the second time around.

fix this and I approve.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Alright, fixed.

[Latios212]

Two things from me before we finish up here:

- Small detail, but everywhere you have a first/second repeat, shift the numbers 1 and 2 to the left and make sure there's a period after them. Also give the D.C. just a bit more room.
- The second page is far more dense than the first. Consider redistributing the measures to space the music more evenly (although this messes up the section change at the page break, so do as you wish - this is just my suggestion).
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[ThatHiddenCharacter]

and make sure there's a period after them

Odd, there had been periods before, I don't know what happened to them, I haven't edited the text at all. Well, that's been fixed as well as everything else you said (and another problem with one of the repeats I noticed and fixed). Files have been updated. Sad that I just missed the update, though.

[Latios212]

Looks good!

[Zeta]

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