[PC] Yume Nikki - "FC Basement" by Rwars

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Yume Nikki
Console: PC
Title: FC Basement
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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[Rwars]

I like how I can just cobble these yume nikki sheets together super quickly because they're so short, feels like I'm actually accomplishing something.

[Libera]

Ah yes, nice and easy to check!

I have only two comments on this:
- The left hand is not that low; it's the octave above that.
- Since it's such a simple sheet I feel like it's important to get the articulation right.  With that in mind I'd suggest writing it like this:

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With a slur over the right hand and tenuto-staccatos on the left hand notes just to differentiate them more.

Other than that, this is good.  Well done!

[Rwars]

Removed the 8mb, added the slur, and now added the tenuo staccatos.

[Libera]

Could you just fix that slur a little so that it's not colliding with the tie at the end?  See my previous image for reference.

[Rwars]

Alright, fixed the slur.

[Libera]

Nice I'm happy.

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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