[SNES] The Legend of the Mystical Ninja - "Rendezvous With That Girl (Picture Matching)" by Code_Nam

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: The Legend of the Mystical Ninja
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Rendezvous With That Girl (Picture Matching)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Code_Name_Geek

[Code_Name_Geek]

Title source

[goldenscruff]

This looks really good.

LH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m2 b4.5 I'm hearing as Bn not C#
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)
LH m3 b4.0 I'm hearing as F# (above current D#)

In measure 11 when the second melody goes to the LH, I think it would be better put in a second voice with opposing stems so it is clearer melody went.

[Kricketune54]

LH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)

I disagree with these points, think its good as is but otherwise in agreeance with Goldenscruff!

• m1 and m3 beat RH 2.5 the D# should be a C#
• m12 LH beats 3 and 4 you could add an octave above to these notes

[Code_Name_Geek]

This looks really good.

LH m1 b1-2 I'm hearing down an octave
LH m2 b4.5 I'm hearing as Bn not C#
LH m3 b1-2.0 I'm hearing down an octave (goes up to A#)
LH m3 b4.0 I'm hearing as F# (above current D#)

In measure 11 when the second melody goes to the LH, I think it would be better put in a second voice with opposing stems so it is clearer melody went.

Done, according to Kricketune54's adjustments.

• m1 and m3 beat RH 2.5 the D# should be a C#
• m12 LH beats 3 and 4 you could add an octave above to these notes

Did both of these as well.

Thanks to both of you for the feedback!

[Kricketune54]

• Maybe add a dashed line from m11 LH 1st voice beat 4 to m12 RH 2nd voice beat 1 (G#)? Just to show the progression.

Since that's a minor point though, I will give this my approval

Also on the box art in the far lower right corner... is that the umbrella miniboss from Kirby?