[3DS] StreetPass Mii Plaza - "To Battle, Heroes!" by Cashwarrior1

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: StreetPass Mii Plaza
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: To Battle, Heroes!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Cashwarrior1

[cashwarrior1]

Find Mii best RPG

[Kricketune54]

• Got an extra "e" in the title
• Tempo marking could use a bit of an update (times new roman number, maestro times note font)
• How did you find the composer credit for this? I tried a lot of searching and wasn't sure how a credit could be located haha
• m2 LH beat 4 I think Gb is audible instead of Ab, kind of like m4 RH 4.0.
• m8 LH 1.5 is the dropping of the Eb intentional?
• m9-10 LH I think Ab works better than Gn in the note clusters, except for m10 4.0 as it sounds like the Ab I hear steps down to Gn.
• m17-18 LH same thinking as above
• m24 LH you could add Cn whole note
• m28 LH 3.0, 3.5, 4.5 hearing Gn instead of Fn for the bottom note. Applies also to m30
• m34 system could be a little thinner, maybe like 1.55" (comparing space between accented staccatos in m35 and m37)

[cashwarrior1]

• Got an extra "e" in the title

streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetpass mii plaza

• How did you find the composer credit for this? I tried a lot of searching and wasn't sure how a credit could be located haha

So I just googled find mii composer and that's what it said, and from digging a lot of places pointed towards this link as a source but it doesn't work for me.
Alternatively, he is listed as the find mii series composer on the smash 4 website

• m8 LH 1.5 is the dropping of the Eb intentional?

Yes, I dropped it to follow the rhythm of the timpani (even though I'm pretty sure other instruments play the Eb)

Updated.

[Kricketune54]

So I just googled find mii composer and that's what it said, and from digging a lot of places pointed towards this link as a source but it doesn't work for me.
Alternatively, he is listed as the find mii series composer on the smash 4 website

Ah good find. Works for me.

• Music note for tempo marking is a little small, should be size 16
• Relistening to m12 I hear some different notes for the RH middle voices:

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• m16 LH beat 1 is this a triplet because it incorporates that ongoing rhythm from previous LH parts (specifically the Cn at the end of the beat 1 triplet)? Otherwise it should be a Cn 16th note and a dotted 8th Bb for beat 1 (keeping the grace note).
 

[cashwarrior1]

• m16 LH beat 1 is this a triplet because it incorporates that ongoing rhythm from previous LH parts (specifically the Cn at the end of the beat 1 triplet)? Otherwise it should be a Cn 16th note and a dotted 8th Bb for beat 1 (keeping the grace note).
 

Maybe I'm a little confused on what you're suggesting the rhythm be, but I hear it as a triplet with those three notes

Updated.

[Kricketune54]

I've transcribed what I'm hearing at m16, I don't hear a Cn at the end of beat 1:

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[cashwarrior1]

ohh okay that makes more sense. Updated.

[Kricketune54]

Great, a few closing bits
• m19 technically the 8va tail is placed a little bit to the right of the note, as opposed to directly over it so you could drag it a little to the right
• m21 can lower p a bit so it lines up more with the cresc.
• m29 can lower the mp a tiny bit, but also raise the cresc. to its right a little so the tail of the cresc. lines up a bit more to the center of the mp dynamic visually
• m30 RH 4.5 and 4.75 hearing this as En and Fn

[cashwarrior1]

• m30 RH 4.5 and 4.75 hearing this as En and Fn

I was about to ask if you meant An and Bn but then I listened to it and yeah it is En Fn lmao

Updated.

[Kricketune54]

Gave this one another check, I have nothing else so it has my approval