[PC] OneShot - "Puzzle Solved" by Francesca Minasi

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: OneShot
Console: PC
Title: Puzzle Solved
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Francesca Minasi

[Francesca]

The jingle that plays upon the solution of a puzzle.

[Latios212]

Nice work! Note-wise, the main thing I have to say is that the B's on beat 4 and 4.75 of measure 1 sound like F# instead.

For formatting, mind giving this topic a read? The left margin is abnormally large and the footer text exceed the bottom margin. Other than that, the 120 in the tempo marking should be un-bold and you can probably move the composer/arranger info, as well as the top staff, down away from the header a little bit.

[Francesca]

Nice work! Note-wise, the main thing I have to say is that the B's on beat 4 and 4.75 of measure 1 sound like F# instead.

Updated!

For formatting, mind giving this topic a read? The left margin is abnormally large and the footer text exceed the bottom margin. Other than that, the 120 in the tempo marking should be un-bold and you can probably move the composer/arranger info, as well as the top staff, down away from the header a little bit.

Should all be good now.

Thank you for the feedback!

[XiaoMigros]

All I have to add is that fermatas on 16th notes at the end of a piece like this are a little odd, I would recommend adding an extra measure with whole notes (or whole rests, because pedal) and add the fermatas there.

[Francesca]

All I have to add is that fermatas on 16th notes at the end of a piece like this are a little odd, I would recommend adding an extra measure with whole notes (or whole rests, because pedal) and add the fermatas there.

Updated! I removed the fermata, since the whole note is long enough. Is that fine?

Thanks for the feedback!

[Latios212]

Sorry I forgot to mention earlier it looks like a dynamic marking (p or mp perhaps?) is missing. Everything else looks good!

[Francesca]

Sorry I forgot to mention earlier it looks like a dynamic marking (p or mp perhaps?) is missing. Everything else looks good!

Updated! I put mp.

Thanks for the feedback!

[Latios212]

Great! You're welcome, and this sheet looks good to me. Approved!

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[XiaoMigros]

Without fermata is fine by me, accepted

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