[MUL] NieR - "Yonah (Piano Ver.)" by Libera

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Submission Information:
Series: Drakengard
Game: NieR
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Yonah (Piano Ver.)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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[Libera]

Been meaning to submit for a while but kept putting off fixing it up.

[mastersuperfan]

Nice.

- I'm not hearing the A on beat 3 of m31 RH.
- Roll the dyad on beat 1 of m34 RH?
- I personally find that m35-36 RH would be a bit clearer split into two layers, but this probably comes down to preference.
- Any particular reason the half note chord in m65 RH isn't tied onto beat 3?

[Libera]

All good points.  I've updated the files.

Unless we're thinking about different things in 35-36 and you were suggesting writing the RH with two layers, in which case I'd prefer not to.

Thanks for checking!

[mastersuperfan]

Yeah, I was referring to the RH, but the way you have it works just as well.

Looks good!

[Latios212]

Super pretty, I'm going to go play this later (hmm, that beginning sounds familiar...)

Impeccable sheet, I only have one and a half comments:
- The chord in m. 17 should have an octave doubled D on the bottom
- Super tiny thing, but I'm not sure I hear the upper octave G in the LH beat 1 of m. 57

[Libera]

I think you're right on both cases and I've put up new files.  Thanks for checking!

[Latios212]

You're welcome ^^

Accepting!

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