The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!

[Oronoco]

Yes! You gotta keep writing!

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Wonderful once again! I really like both the characterization and the new characters you added. As for that mysterious Pokemon, I looked up Pokemon that can use hyper beam, and the only ones that are big and have both wings and legs are Dragonite, Salamence, and Charizard. I don't think it's Charizard because you would probably use a fire type move, so it's either Dragonite or Salamence. Again, awesome job, I really enjoyed it.

Who said anything about wings, though?

Yes! You gotta keep writing!

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

:O that actually sounds really cool! You might have something there!

Anyhoo, thank you both! I'll be starting Chapter 2 either today or tomorrow. (I took a little break from both music and writing for a day or so, but it's over now!)

[Hero of Trains]

Well, it did say "the creature paused mid-flight". I guess there are some flying Pokemon that don't have wings, like Rayquaza, but Rayquaza doesn't have legs.
I appreciate your hard work, we all do, but make sure to pace yourself, too. We don't want you to get overwhelmed!

[E. Gadd Industries]

I'm trying to. XD thank you, though

[BrainyLucario]

Great Job, E. Gadd!! You're a pretty good writer.

[mikey]

uh yeah good job
just please remember to use 2 spaces after punctuation

[Dudeman]

Uh, what? Why's that a thing?

[Hero of Trains]

It technically is, but is becoming less common. A lot of style guides still recommend it, though. Also, it's only for periods.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Hey, all! So progress has been more than slow since school started. I will try to work on the story some at least once every day at school (maybe during lunch? I haven't quite ironed out all the details). So, this is just a reminder that this hasn't been abandoned, just immensely slowed.

[Oronoco]

Good to hear! I've really enjoyed reading it, so I hope you keep enjoying writing it.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Oh, I love writing things like this! School has just been a sea of homework lately, and I haven't found a good time to do anything, including arranging. I am beginning to figure out different times I can do things, though.

[K-NiGhT]

is this still going on? I'd love to try and join in if possible

[mikey]

Yes it is.  Follow the guidelines in the op and e gadd will happily add you to the story

[E. Gadd Industries]

is this still going on? I'd love to try and join in if possible

Yea, you can send your character info via PM or here.

(Thanks, Noc!)

[E. Gadd Industries]

You make me really want to enter a mystery dungeon called Withering Marketplace (with GtI graphics, please). It would just be so cool.

I was thinking about this: would someone be interested in composing music for a mystery dungeon by this name/description given? If not, I may end up doing it at some point; I need to work on my composing skills.