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#11

Submissions / Re: [NDS] Pokémon Black Versio...

Last post by XiaoMigros - June 30, 2025, 01:43:26 PM

• m4: grace notes would be better as a mordent, and the last note can tie into the lower layer of the next measure
• m5: flip the LH layers so the stems point correctly and the rests are in the right place.
• m6: RH beat 3 needs a staccato (or eighth instead of quarter)
• m8: grace note should be written as e#
• m9: same comment with the layers, I hear a 16th note D in the run after the C. grace note in the RH is missing a slur
• m11 & 12: I'd write the RH in one layer, and maybe add slurs to show the different instruments instead. 
• m13: the A at beat 1 can be moved to the lower layer, (unless you make it clear withslurs that) it's not part of the following melody.
• m14: the rest in the  RH can be hidden.
• m13+: check the bass you've written again here, it makes some octave jumps and doesn't just stick between two notes.
• Ties are spaced to widely in this sheet, causing some weird spacing inconsistencies. If ctrl+4 doesn't fix things, you should change the tie length in document options.

#12

Submissions / Re: [PC] Deltarune - "Susie" b...

Last post by XiaoMigros - June 30, 2025, 01:29:40 PM

Hi, sorry for the delay! This is almost approval-ready, just a couple things:

• Pedal markings: I think it's best to hide them and a a 'con pedale' text just below the bottom staff in measure 1. I'm not sure if Notepad lets you do this, so if you agree I can make the change.
• The 'play LH one octave...' text is not needed, since you already have the 8vb marking. 
• I'd recommend writing the non-guitar notes as two tied whole notes, like the left hand notes. Also, for measures 1 and 2, I would move the guitar to voice 2 and other instrument to voice 1, so that the stems and ties point in the right direction.
• The G naturals should be spelled as Fx (the chord is D# major / G#)
• In the last measure, I think the non-guitar instrument changes to B on beat 3.
• You could add slurs to each guitar phrase, so the performer knows which notes are part of the melody and should be played louder.

#13

Submissions / Re: [N64] Star Fox 64 - "Starf...

Last post by XiaoMigros - June 30, 2025, 01:20:41 PM

Hi, welcome to NSM! This is quite a long track, here's some feedback for the first page:

• m1: The grace notes start on F and go up to B. They should have a slash (to show they're played before the beat) and 2 beams rather than one.
• m5,m6,m9, m10: I don't think it's worth writing these ties out, since they can't be played and only add visual clutter to the sheet. I would write the timpani hits in layer 2 and everything else in layer 1.
• m7: collisions with the cross-staff note: note should be pointing downwards, slur upwards
• m6 and similar: I feel like non-staccato quarters are a little long for the LH stabs
• m12: Missing a B in the RH
• m12 LH: I'm not hearing the line of these low G's. I hear a line starting on D, to complete the triads. 

#14

Site News / Re: Aquatic Update part 2

Last post by TheZeldaPianist275 - June 30, 2025, 07:34:05 AM

Wonderful job sticking through this one, everyone! It was well worth the effort from the looks of these.

#15

Request / (PS1) FINAL FANTASY VIII - JUL...

Last post by Cafa - June 30, 2025, 07:24:09 AM

Hi all! Please consider submitting Julia from FF VIII. It shouldn't take too long and is such an amazing tune. Thanks!

#16

Submissions / Re: [NES] Kid Icarus - "Game O...

Last post by Yugi - June 30, 2025, 05:55:10 AM

Made all requested changes (and also added dynamics since I seemed to have forgotten them)! Kept right hand in treble clef because Finale proceeded to act super weird when I tried changing it to bass clef — transposed the notes down to their thirds but still made them sound the same in playback.

#17

Submissions / Re: [NDS] Ace Attorney Investi...

Last post by Metamyrrh - June 29, 2025, 09:19:58 PM

Thank you so much for taking a look! Sorry about the delay in responding.

• Discussed with another updater briefly, and I think this one would work a bit better in 12/8 instead of 6/4. Would update time signature as well.
• m2 LH hearing the 4th dotted quarter note as an 8th note followed by a quarter note length An (just the lower octave)
• m37 LH current 6.0 is an An

I made the first two changes, thanks! But I'm still hearing a Bb in m37.

Here are the updated files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/1w6260k61grgfoc/the+puppeteer+of+the+game+v2.zip/file

#18

Submissions / Re: [MUL] Genshin Impact - "An...

Last post by Latios212 - June 29, 2025, 08:47:41 PM

My apologies for the wait!! Thank you both for taking a look, this really is a beautiful piece isn't it?

• I'm not hearing the D & C in m.37(m.36?) b1.50-75 RH. I can just barely make it out in m.36, but it sounds like reverb to me?
• In m.38(36-38?) maybe it'd be nice to have some indication of the echoing motion similar to m.8

Yeah, I think you're right, it doesn't sound like the runs play on beat 1. I've added accents on beat 1 and 3 in these few measures to indicate the slight emphasis.

m9-14 I'm not hearing the An in the LH, and not hearing the Fn m15-16

m23 I'm not hearing the Fn in the LH. Maybe just DAD?

m27-32 I'm hearing a middle C as well (in LH). I have no idea how they play it. Three hands? Mozart nose tech? Foot?

Yep, right on all points. For the third, I think Yu-Peng Chen is just a wizard. He played the piano on the recording, apparently. For the purposes of this sheet though, I'm inclined to just leave the C's out to avoid asking the performer to do any of the above. The half note line in m. 26 is left unresolved and the C isn't present in the LH of m. 31-32, but I don't think the piece loses too much as other C's are plentiful in these measures.

Files updated, thanks again!

#19

Submissions / Re: [3DS] Rune Factory 4 - "Wi...

Last post by Latios212 - June 29, 2025, 08:09:49 PM

Great work! About notes: I don't think I hear the C in m. 17 beat 3. Actually, I think the preceding and following chords might be just open sixths as well?

Aside from that, a few visual things:
- When having a roll marking on beat 1 that's right up against the barline, using the Measure Tool to add something like 0.05" to the measure helps the spacing work a bit better
- The 1. and 2. over the endings should be aligned over beat 1 (a bit far to the right in 23/25 and left in 42/43 right now)
- I think the D.C. is supposed to go over the staff (and the ending bracket here I suppose). The staves on the second page could use more space between them anyway.

#20

Submissions / Re: [GBC] The Legend of Zelda:...

Last post by goldenscruff - June 29, 2025, 04:00:57 PM

Are you talking about moving some LH notes up to the RH staff? Y, I thought about it, adding a couple of the last notes in LH up, but rejected that. Didn't thought it was necessary.
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