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#1
Quote from: Kricketune54 on August 28, 2024, 02:11:31 PMVery limited commentary from me seems to be in pretty good shape
• m3 LH beat 3 the Cn here as I understand is up an octave originally, you could move it back to that original octave and just have it in the RH second voice
Thank you for looking it over! :) That change sounds good to me.
#2
Thanks for taking a look! Everything should be updated.
#3

Thank you to Latios for helping to convert my files!

I know there are some appearance issues with the rests and rolled-chord markings, but I don't think I can fix them from Musescore.

This game is finally going to be released in English in September. I used the localized game title in the sheet. However, the localized song title is not currently known.
#4
Thank you very much for the feedback! Everything is updated, except for the last point, did you mean the note in m15 LH beat 4.5? I still hear a D there, not a B. I also added some more dynamic markings.
#5
Just one thing, one of the staccato markings in m11 LH is on the wrong side of the note. Otherwise, everything looks great! Thank you for you and all of the updaters' feedback and help in improving this sheet.
#7
Thank you very much for looking over this, Bloop! I appreciate your time.

m7, m9, and m11 RH beat 1: I hear all of these as the same, so I changed all of the Cs into Ds.
m24 LH beat 7: This note was not staccato on purpose, since I hear this note as longer than the others in the LH this measure. I added a tenuto marking to distinguish it.
m25-28 LH: Is this what you mean? I have a feeling that I may still be missing the harmonies you mentioned.

As for the m3 and m17 RH staccato issues, I'm not seeing these in my file, so I'm not sure how to make the change. Sorry about that. Everything else is updated! https://www.mediafire.com/file/jbi4nr98wkqb52c/A+Battle+of+Wits+v9.zip/file
#8
Thank you both for the input! I think it is totally reasonable to not include SMT for consistency with sheets from other SMT titles. I updated the original post.
#9
Just one sheet from me :)

[PS2] Digital Devil Saga - "Never Ending Rain"
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#10
Projects / Re: 🫧🌊Aquatic Update🌊🫧
June 19, 2024, 06:35:01 PM
It's a menu theme, but would "Never Ending Rain" fit the theme?
#11
What a little treat of a song to play :) Random comments on the LH: I don't hear the last note in m3 or m8, and beat 1 in m7 does not sound staccato to me.
#12
m14: Got it, added the Bn! Yes, I think it sounds more like the original to sustain all the notes to the end of the measure
m27-28 RH: Changed. My only misgiving is that the LH should strike the same Bb on m27 beat 2.5.

Thank you for the thorough review! :)

Updated files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/3tgod29c2aku4u2/I'll+be+close+by+v6.zip/file
#13
Thanks! That m3-m4 sounds great. Updated files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/51xvmp46rxfxd4z/I'll+be+close+by+v5.zip/file

For m14 RH, sorry, what do you mean? A higher Bn is not reachable.

For m28 RH, I agree that the changes make the RH voices clearer. Originally I had the lower Fn in a separate layer to make it clear that the LH should play Fn in beat 2.0. Is it still clear now? Also, m27-28 I added Ds in the RH for the faint string layer.
#14
Thanks for taking a look, sorry for the delayed response! And, sorry, I misunderstood what you meant for the tremolos in m15-17. I tried out what you were thinking and found those tremolos quite awkward to play in that spot. I think a trill is easier to play and gives a similar impression (when executed with the dynamics you notated). Does that work? Also, I added the slur to m32!

Here are the changed files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/729wgpi2uxcgk8o/I'll+be+close+by+v4.zip/file
#15
No worries about the wait. I know there are many submissions. Thank you very much for taking the time to look through it! :)

m12 LH: I still hear an A# in beat 4.0.

m15-17 LH: For the tremolos, I'm hearing different notes that I have put in as trills. I'm not confident about the pitches and I know the hands crossing is iffy, so let me know if what I have put in is not workable.

m29-30 RH: To avoid clashes, only added the strings layer where the LH is not playing.

Fixed everything else! Here are the updated files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/twpiaky7k1wui8q/I'll+be+close+by+v3.zip/file