Quote from: Kricketune54 on August 28, 2024, 02:11:31 PMVery limited commentary from me seems to be in pretty good shapeThank you for looking it over! That change sounds good to me.
• m3 LH beat 3 the Cn here as I understand is up an octave originally, you could move it back to that original octave and just have it in the RH second voice