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#1
In measures 45, 47, 49, 51, I still hear an E on beat 4 (in the harpsichord).

I updated the pdf and musx.
#2
I made those edits and updated the pdf and musx files.
#3
I'll be editing this and Fall, life got hectic with finals and I never got back to editing these submissions.

I made the edits suggested by Xiao and edited the pdf and musx files: (measures refer to current draft, after doubling note durations)
  • m1-16: added dim. and cresc
  • Changed TS and doubled note durations
  • m22-44 wrote ossia into layer 2 of LH
  • m25-28 RH sorted itself out after doubling the note durations
  • m29-44 g# doesn't obscure beat 4 anymore
  • m45-52 moved layer 2 in the upper staff to the lower staff
  • m53-56 and 89-92 noteheads overlap now, all rests in RH layer 2 shown and final half note in rh layer 2 spans an octave instead of a tenth
  • the sections immediately following have the lh parts in lower staff
  • m74 etc. beat 2 is shown
  • fermata added to last notes
#6
Thanks for letting me know. I fixed both submissions.
#7
Just noticed that this thread is a thing. I made some changes to the mus file and re-exported the pdf and midi file.

Quote from: Maelstrom on April 06, 2022, 10:13:05 AMOoooooooo another Umineko fan!

First glance at the notes looks pretty solid, but I think you're missing a few notes in the chords, especially in the intro. Nice use of cross-staff notation tho, it works well here.

Yeah I noticed that things sounded too open and notes were missing. I think half-pedaling will keep the open voicings while making it sound closer to the original.

Also it's good to see another Umineko fan-- I'm on EP8 now, where
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